Sin's Introduction~Haiku August 22, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps red fruit temptation adam’s rib took the first bite sin’s introduction ©Susie Clevenger 2011 http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/ Comments Ginny Brannan said… Just saw this pop up on my feed for your poetry page, and was happy to see you posted here. Perfect haiku for this Adam and Eve prompt.'adam's rib took the first bite'Indeed!! :-) Irene said… So beautiful, my attention was caught by poignant description of sin's introduction. Well-done! :-)Irenehttp://softvoiceofafreespirit.blogspot.com/2011/08/birth-of-sin.html Anonymous said… Very cleverly written for prompt!!:-) edwinbaru said… nice and brief. I love it Rashmi said… So beautiful....... Morning said… lovely, have fun! Rek Sesh said… Maybe next time she should let him take more bites...well written Uma Anandane said… very poignant..nice one
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'adam's rib took the first bite'
Indeed!! :-)
Irene
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:-)