Life Recycled August 04, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Life recycled in scrap metal windmills. We blow our wind of glorious yesterdays in rusty reminiscing, squeaking on the listener’s ear. © Susie Clevenger 2011 Photo prompt courtesy of Tess Kincaid, Magpie Tales #76 http://magpietales.blogspot.com/ Comments Helen said… Love the rusty reminiscing angle ... must confess to a little rust here and there myself. Nanka said… The last line made me smile "squeaking on the listener’s ear." and "in rusty reminiscing" Nice take on the prompt picture!! Erratic Thoughts said… Hmm that is Life, so true!Loved your take...:) Susie Clevenger said… Helen..thank you for your response. I too have "squeaked" at times. Susie Clevenger said… Nanka Thank you...always happy to make someone smile Susie Clevenger said… Erratic Thoughts thank you. I also have been guilty of "squeaking" at times :) Tess Kincaid said… "...squeaking in the listener's ear" is wonderful. Squeak is one of my favorite words. Susie Clevenger said… Thank you Tess Ginny Brannan said… 'We blow our windof glorious yesterdays inrusty reminiscing,squeaking on the listener’s ear.'Loving your words, such a beautiful and perfect take on the prompt! Jim Swindle said… You said a lot, well, in few words. "Rusty reminiscing" is excellent. Glenn Buttkus said… Nice poem, Susie; it has a catchy way of holding ourinterest, and yet deliveringyour message, showing usseveral deeper meaningsbeneath the simplisticveneer.
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"squeaking on the listener’s ear." and
"in rusty reminiscing"
Nice take on the prompt picture!!
Loved your take...:)
of glorious yesterdays in
rusty reminiscing,
squeaking on the listener’s ear.'
Loving your words, such a beautiful and perfect take on the prompt!
catchy way of holding our
interest, and yet delivering
your message, showing us
several deeper meanings
beneath the simplistic
veneer.