Breathe My Love~(Haiku Height's Prompt #58 Breathe)


sweetheart you can breathe
inhale the promise I give
my love will not leave

our heartbeats will dance
among eternity’s stars
heaven our dance floor

quiet your distress
I speak a forever vow
my lips won’t recant

©Susie Clevenger 2011


 

Comments

Unknown said…
beautiful I love it! And the great pictures too!
August 26, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Vinay Leo R. said…
Romantic haikus.. all of them :) Loved it!

My post - Patiently Trying
August 27, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Susie Clevenger said…
Leo, for some reason I can't read your poetry on "Inside Inkdrops." I can't scroll down the page. It is like it is locked. Hopefully it is just a temporary glitch on my end and I can get to it later. I would love to read what is written there.

Susie
August 27, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Judith Westerfield said…
My favorite is the last "stanza" - perfect.
August 27, 2011 at 5:00 PM
Nanka said…
Wonderfully romantic and the sets of Haiku reveal a tale!!
August 27, 2011 at 11:40 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said…
So very lovely. Loved it and the image is beautiful.

Melanie
August 29, 2011 at 4:18 PM
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