"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
©Susie Clevenger 2015
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I absolutely adore this!! The opening lines had me captivated instantly! :DBeautifully executed :DLots of love,Sanaa
Well done. Isn't it sad how rare face to face is?
I'm with Sanaa, I really like this, and though it is spot-on and predicts a rather gray future, surely wherever birds are involved, there has to be a way.
Well said - in all sorts of ways!
typing voiceless messagesacross lifeless, electronic palms.Human connection sacrificed tothe digital blink of separation...... love the way you stated that. Too true.
This is just excellent, Susie!
Bravo for visiting the real world~ It is sad, how we are always connected digital-sometimes we need to be alone with ourselves~ Love, the view in your poem.
"Human connection sacrificed to / the digital blink of separation."...so true...
I love the perfect progression of this poem.
"from a wineglass horizon" is such a clever original twist and "seagulls...typing voiceless messages"! That is incredible. Very clever girl you are.
Your opening lines are so sensual...of the senses, a great contrast to the electronic, removed from life ending. So well expressed, Susie. It really has run rampant.
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