"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
both of these are very beautiful.
i will come to you when twilight danceswith sunsetThis a beautiful short poem which can be turned into a memorable haiku:twilight...dancing withsunset
"Twilight", that's the word I have been looking for these past 24 hours, for two of my poems.Thank you Susie.And these images are overwhelmingly beautiful.
Your lunes are bleeding with colors and complementing the glorious pictures ~ Thank you for participating in Sunday's Challenge form ~ Grace
Both are complete on the minimum to the maximum rule. The second is quite seductive; I await the moment.
Beautiful, Susie. I love 'when twilight dances with sunset.'
I adore that second one! Wow!
gosh, beautiful, Susie.
These are beautifully crafted Lunes, my favourite is the second and the pictures are really lovely. Haiga at its best,,,,
Everything this form should be and more, in my opinion--the first is heavy and dark, yet perfectly balanced--the second just beautiful, and one more word would be too many.
love the second one
Both are gorgeous, Susie. I love the presentation with the poem written on the photograph. I should try that.
These are lovely and a quite sensual. I love the lune written on the photos!
So beautiful, Susie - words and images.
Beautifully done, Susie. That first photo is amazing, and your poems are lovely.K
lovely pictures and the words bring out the beauty..well done..
Wonderful photos to match the magic of your words~Vivid and romantic ;D
The photos are just the start... the "blood red moon" a perfect description, as it rises through autumn leaves. These were both set in nature, too, which is part of the Japanese haiku! Nicely done, Susie! Amy
These are so beautiful. You are so talented.Blessings.
Lovely images with superimposed words? Fantastic!!!
Both images are stunning, Susie. The second haiku is my favorite, sounds romantic :)
These are lovely. More so because of the way you've linked them to gorgeous photos. The second one dances in my head. Thank you.
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