Wednesday, April 11, 2012

A Renga in Progress

Grace O'Malley at Real Toads has challenged us to write a renga. A renga is a long Japanese poem, a series of very short verses in an alternating pattern, built by the group. There are links and references scattered within the greater poem, and each verse is related without being repetitive.




stars wink at rainbow feathers
that tease with each fluttering                           



9 comments:

Laurie Kolp said...

Love it, Susie.

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is such an interesting exercise - to see how each thought leads to the next. I love the inclusion of the stars.

Grace O'Malley said...

Every single person has brought their own style to the piece. It's amazing.

Margaret said...

feathers teasing, stars winking ... lovely!

Other Mary said...

Wonderful - I love where you're taking this!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

So beautiful!!!!!!!!!

Mystic_Mom said...

Ooooh....sigh...love!

Kay L. Davies said...

So pretty, Susie, with stars and rainbows and feathers, it opens the group poem process up to a world of possibilities. Well done.
K

Jinksy said...

The picture changes to a fan dancer...:)