Grace O'Malley at Real Toads has challenged us to write a renga. A renga is a long Japanese poem, a series of very short verses in an alternating pattern, built by the group. There are links and references scattered within the greater poem, and each verse is related without being repetitive.
stars wink at rainbow feathers
that tease with each fluttering
that tease with each fluttering
9 comments:
Love it, Susie.
This is such an interesting exercise - to see how each thought leads to the next. I love the inclusion of the stars.
Every single person has brought their own style to the piece. It's amazing.
feathers teasing, stars winking ... lovely!
Wonderful - I love where you're taking this!
So beautiful!!!!!!!!!
Ooooh....sigh...love!
So pretty, Susie, with stars and rainbows and feathers, it opens the group poem process up to a world of possibilities. Well done.
K
The picture changes to a fan dancer...:)
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