Saturday, February 4, 2012

The Haiku Challenge Day #5 ~ Acrostic Haiku



pursed lips, sour tongue
rail their condemnation
yellow teeth of rage
  
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saffron horizon
umber smudges mix with gold
night is impatient
























fluttering pleating
an artistic seduction
nature of flirting



©Susie Clevenger 2012
Image 1: Photobucket
Image 2: Photograph: Bettina Marchello
Image 3: Painting:
Woman with Fan, Edoardo Tofano
This is Day 5 of  29 Haiku in 29 Days
Today's Theme: UR Choice Acrostic Haiku

17 comments:

Jen R said...

Lov that :)

Susie Clevenger said...

Thanks Jen

cloakedmonk.com said...

I love the impatient night!

Asni said...

Wow! All very nice. Love your take on fan.

Cressida said...

The fan one is excellent.

Mama Zen said...

I love that second one!

Pranali Kadam said...

Sun,is nicely and strongly painted.
Magnificent Haiku.

Heaven said...

Nice that you use different words with pictures...perfect ~

this was quite a challenge, isn't it ~

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Nice 3, but sun gets my vote!

Karen said...

I like them all! I love the coyness of the fan.

Lilly said...

love them all! but especially the second one :)

Chèvrefeuille said...

Awesome triplet of acrostic haiku, thank you Susie for sharing. The one about the sun is ... perfect.

Amber said...

I love the last two. :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I do so like the idea of night being impatient!

Not Acrostic, but My Choice!

Grace said...

Picture and words complement perfectly ~

becca givens said...

OMG -- three -- I had trouble with one! :-)

The "sun" was my favorite. The imagery was perfect to perk my spirits.

Nice job, Susie, as always!! Thank you for sharing ~~ Happy Sunday!

Someone is Special said...

Susies,I loved your take.. Loved it..

Someone is Special