Saturday, February 11, 2012

The Haiku Challenge # 12 ~ The Sunshine of Butterflies


my world turned yellow
with fluttering butterflies
joy arrived on wings

the sunshine of butterflies

joy arrived on wings
with fluttering butterflies
my world turned yellow


©Susie Clevenger 2012
Image: popularscreensaver.com
29 days of 29 Haiku prompt: colors
Poetry Form: Naisaiku

12 comments:

Gemma Wiseman said...

O how delightful! Adore the words ... sunshine of butterflies!

Asni said...

"Joy arrive on wings" - love it!

Mama Zen said...

This is really pretty!

Lolamouse said...

Butterflies are indeed joyful! Lovely!

Denise Moncrief said...

I love the mirroring. Lovely haiku.

Heaven said...

I like the sunshine in your words...beautiful picture too ~

Grace

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Loved it..Butterflies!!..I love them....Thanks for writing on butterflies...

becca givens said...

I feel like I am flitting about ... I love butterflies ... they flit and flutter and float! Great image to pair with your uplifting words!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Butterflies, and yellow... right up my street!!!

Nicely!

Amber said...

Butterflies are so lively and positive! I love them!
And they do bring joy!
I loved the line "joy arrived on wings"! Really nice! :)

Susie Clevenger said...

Thanks to all of you for your kind words...I am so in love with butterflies.

Someone is Special said...

Delightful Haiku Susie.. Loved it so much..