"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
This was poignant. excellent.
yes, who did write those love notes?
Beautiful Susie...Also - I gave you an award on my blog today! Come by and grab it when you can :)
what secrets do those pages hold?i like your use of "yellow pages", it gives a sense of age and time (or timelessness). lovely work!
Greater mystery .... are they unopened love notes? :-)
Your haiku was a perfect and complete story. Like it!
You created such a wonderful mystery here!! The curiosity is killing!! :D
Just superb... I recall my post on 'Notebook' prompt on OSI...preserve these lovenotes well..not everyone will understand and interpret them with heart and soul..
let it remain a mystery.. I love that thought u portrayed.
I love the mysteriousness of it. Lovely.
Great haiku and the photo to go with it. Nice job.
Excellent Haiku. Wonder what is in those love letters.Melanie
This is a true mystery...
This really captures "mystery"--love it!
There's nothing more mysterious than an opened letter of any kind--which is why I just can't bear to leave envelopes unopened!Sunflower Mystery
:) and some love notes are better left unopened... :)
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