Saturday, November 5, 2011

Unopened


love notes unanswered
yellow pages gather dust
mystery remains



©Susie Clevenger

17 comments:

anthonynorth said...

This was poignant. excellent.

zongrik said...

yes, who did write those love notes?

Michelle My Bell said...

Beautiful Susie...

Also - I gave you an award on my blog today! Come by and grab it when you can :)

dsnake1 said...

what secrets do those pages hold?
i like your use of "yellow pages", it gives a sense of age and time (or timelessness).
lovely work!

beccagivens said...

Greater mystery .... are they unopened love notes?

:-)

Judith Westerfield said...

Your haiku was a perfect and complete story. Like it!

Nanka said...

You created such a wonderful mystery here!! The curiosity is killing!! :D

Ramesh Sood said...

Just superb... I recall my post on 'Notebook' prompt on OSI...preserve these lovenotes well..not everyone will understand and interpret them with heart and soul..

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

let it remain a mystery.. I love that thought u portrayed.

deowriter said...

I love the mysteriousness of it. Lovely.

Renae W. Mackley said...

Great haiku and the photo to go with it. Nice job.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Excellent Haiku. Wonder what is in those love letters.


Melanie

Ruchi Jain said...

This is a true mystery...

Amy E Thompson said...

This really captures "mystery"--love it!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

There's nothing more mysterious than an opened letter of any kind--which is why I just can't bear to leave envelopes unopened!

Sunflower Mystery

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

:) and some love notes are better left unopened... :)

Almas said...

:) and some love notes are better left unopened... :)