"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Our Side of Heaven


I want to lie with you
on our side of heaven,
drifting among clouds
of secrets spoken in kisses.
A place where the sun
shines from your smile
and rain falls
in laughter teardrops.
I wish to feel the thunder
of your heart beating against mine
when passion’s storm engulfs us.
Our side of heaven is you and I
wrapped in love’s arms
in tender moments of seclusion.

©Susie Clevenger
 Mag 92

29 comments :

Martin said...

"...on our side of heaven,
drifting among clouds..." Beautiful.

Christine said...

I imagine they are dreaming these words as they embrace and kiss, beautiful words.

Jotter Girl said...

I agree with Martin. "Our side of heaven" is a really beautiful thought.

thingy said...

How romantic. Lovely words. : )

anthonynorth said...

Beautiful and dreamy.

Redefining Normal said...

Beautifully, romantically written. ♥

manicddaily said...

Sounds pretty great! Very nice. K.

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

beautiful, sweet, romantic, you got it all... love it...

JJRod'z

Tess Kincaid said...

Beautiful...

C Hummel Kornell a/k/a C Hummel Wilson said...

Lovely feeling.

meethimirchi said...

very romantic, just took me into other side of heaven indeed :)

Chantell said...

Wow, this is such a beautiful poem! I love it ♥ It would be wonderful framed up on the wall, or read out at a wedding...You write so well :o)

mylittlewordz said...

Yes, very romantic. I hope it's based on real-life experiences...
Jamie

Beyond Horizon said...

Hmm, close to beloved, like 'feeling' the beauty of the nature. :)

Pat Hatt said...

Truly romantic and on our side of heaven was a wonderful line.

pspacer11 said...

Beautifully romantic! This weeks prompt has shown that there are more romantics left than I first thought.

Brian Miller said...

oo la la...a storm i do not mind standing in...nice elements the thundering heart...nice passion there...

Cad said...

Sounds good to me...

Shauna said...

Susie, whoa this is such a passionate
romantic poem - simply flows into
my heart.

Carrie Burtt said...

So much beauty in this Susie!!

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, how sweet this is!

Isabel Doyle said...

how could one not want this heaven?

lovely poem

Doctor FTSE said...

Nicely expressed.

keiths ramblings said...

Tender and passionate. Lovely.

Jinksy said...

Ahhh - nice!

Gerry/Strummed words said...

A nice love song.

zongrik said...

a couple that is this much in love deserves their own side of heaven

susan m hinckley said...

I love some of the images in this poem, starting with the very first - beautiful.

Ed Pilolla said...

i want of piece of that side. heartfelt.

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