I want to lie with you
on our side of heaven,
drifting among clouds
of secrets spoken in kisses.
A place where the sun
shines from your smile
and rain falls
in laughter teardrops.
I wish to feel the thunder
of your heart beating against mine
when passion’s storm engulfs us.
Our side of heaven is you and I
wrapped in love’s arms
in tender moments of seclusion.
©Susie Clevenger
Mag 92
29 comments:
"...on our side of heaven,
drifting among clouds..." Beautiful.
I imagine they are dreaming these words as they embrace and kiss, beautiful words.
I agree with Martin. "Our side of heaven" is a really beautiful thought.
How romantic. Lovely words. : )
Beautiful and dreamy.
Beautifully, romantically written. ♥
Sounds pretty great! Very nice. K.
beautiful, sweet, romantic, you got it all... love it...
JJRod'z
Beautiful...
Lovely feeling.
very romantic, just took me into other side of heaven indeed :)
Wow, this is such a beautiful poem! I love it ♥ It would be wonderful framed up on the wall, or read out at a wedding...You write so well :o)
Yes, very romantic. I hope it's based on real-life experiences...
Jamie
Hmm, close to beloved, like 'feeling' the beauty of the nature. :)
Truly romantic and on our side of heaven was a wonderful line.
Beautifully romantic! This weeks prompt has shown that there are more romantics left than I first thought.
oo la la...a storm i do not mind standing in...nice elements the thundering heart...nice passion there...
Sounds good to me...
Susie, whoa this is such a passionate
romantic poem - simply flows into
my heart.
So much beauty in this Susie!!
Oh, how sweet this is!
how could one not want this heaven?
lovely poem
Nicely expressed.
Tender and passionate. Lovely.
Ahhh - nice!
A nice love song.
a couple that is this much in love deserves their own side of heaven
I love some of the images in this poem, starting with the very first - beautiful.
i want of piece of that side. heartfelt.
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