"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Love the rusty reminiscing angle ... must confess to a little rust here and there myself.
The last line made me smile "squeaking on the listener’s ear." and "in rusty reminiscing" Nice take on the prompt picture!!
Hmm that is Life, so true!Loved your take...:)
Helen..thank you for your response. I too have "squeaked" at times.
Nanka Thank you...always happy to make someone smile
Erratic Thoughts thank you. I also have been guilty of "squeaking" at times :)
"...squeaking in the listener's ear" is wonderful. Squeak is one of my favorite words.
Thank you Tess
'We blow our windof glorious yesterdays inrusty reminiscing,squeaking on the listener’s ear.'Loving your words, such a beautiful and perfect take on the prompt!
You said a lot, well, in few words. "Rusty reminiscing" is excellent.
Nice poem, Susie; it has a catchy way of holding ourinterest, and yet deliveringyour message, showing usseveral deeper meaningsbeneath the simplisticveneer.
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