"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
©Susie Clevenger 2017
Real Toads Mini Challenge ~ Condense a Poem
Indeed... we need some lightness... love the honey verb.
This is perfect.
Well said delight
Wonderful, Susie! I love, 'the glow of cinnamon light.'
Definitely we should add that cinnamon!
Beautifully put, Susie. I love your honeyed words and especially 'the glow of cinnamon light'.
"a weight too hard to digest" exactly what I felt too. Love the "honeyed words and cinnamon light"
"Every poem needn't carry a burden".........as so many do in these troubled times. Well expressed, Susie.
That is such a simple and profound distillation.
I want to eat this with a cup of tea. "...be brave enough for honeyed words". Love that!
...the glow of cinnamon light... I see I'm not the only admirer of that phrase!
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