"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Monday, February 11, 2013

Surfing the Wind



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    w
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     riding a
         w
        a
        v
         e
           of wind,
       t
        h
         e
      l
        e
            a
                f
           surfs
       its
       w
        a
          y
        t
          o
             t
          h
        e
          ground.
                     O


©Susie Clevenger 2013

16 comments :

anthonynorth said...

Great visual flow.

Laura said...

g
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articulated:-)

lucychili said...

lovely visual poem

Laurie Kolp said...

The leaves have been surfing a lot lately... sometimes even jet skiing.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love it. That is exactly how it looks, falling. Mesmerizing.

Marian said...

lovely!

Other Mary said...

Very visual, the leaves here (what few are left) are skating on the breeze - brrr!

Herotomost said...

Your creativity knows know bounds...just like your taste in music. Very cool.

Jim said...

Hi Neighbor, I love your shape poem. The words too. Very cleverly done.
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Helen said...

GIRL ???? You are making me dizzy. (love the form and the poem)

Robert Gibson said...

Smiling big time. Loved the visuals :)

vivinfrance said...

a beautiful form for the graceful leaf fall.

Margaret said...

...surfs its way

Yes, they do. Very cute.

Mixi said...

Following the trail of letters felt like floating gently down. A great visual treat. Creativity at its best!

Emma Major said...

I love visual poems, wonderful

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is such a delight! It put me in mind of e.e. cummings' 'snowflake'.

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