Friday, October 12, 2012

Yesterday's Eyes

Image ~ Leslie Moon



Come out, come out wherever you are…
I am here. Can’t you see me?

Hide and seek had lost its magic
among the little girl’s tears
pleading for discovery.


Pressed like a butterfly under glass
brown eyes peer with yesterday’s eyes
into the oblivious stares of strangers.

She wants her mother.
They only want the museum tour.
Eternity has too many hours on its clock.


©Susie Clevenger 2012
 This was written from the image prompt by Leslie Moon for NWCU's


5 comments:

marousia said...

Great writing - love the final stanza

Susie Swanson said...

Beautiful as always..Blessings

Fred Rutherford said...

strong response here, really amazing verse to accompany the prompt photo. Very nicely done. Thanks

Fred Rutherford said...

strong response here, really amazing verse to accompany the prompt photo. Very nicely done. Thanks

Natasha Head said...

They only want the museum tour...Susie, for me, this line, above all others, brings the goosebumps...fantastic response to a fantastic image...and the incorporation of the video only lends to the "haunting"..