"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Cool haiku. Really like how you incorporated a prevailing image. Darkness/deserted/shadow- very nicely done. Thanks
Eerie and desolate using captivating imagery. Well done. I like it.
Beautiful image in words - I could see the whole night scene so clearly.
I love reading your poems on here even if I mostly read on Facebook :)
I felt myself walking in the darkness too, and darker still when you use the word "ebony". A special haiku.
Love the imagery, Susie!! :)
one of my favorite haikus you have written, separate images brought together as one, from the sky to the street.
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