Sunday, February 5, 2012

The Haiku Challenge Day #6~Thoughts



they rattle, tumble
badgering my pounding head
i pray for silence

one random
thought
now multiplied



©Susie Clevenger
Photograph: Google Images
This is day 6 of 29 Haiku in 29 Days
Today’s theme is: Think
Today’s haiku form includes Pi-Ku

16 comments:

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Yeah, that's a good prayer to pray, excellent pi-ku too!

cloakedmonk.com said...

Have you been living in my head? Perfect!

Cressida de Nova said...

Yep,that's a familiar scenario.Must be a poet thing:)

becca givens said...

Apt description I can relate to ... very nice! Happy week, Susie!

Pranali Kadam said...

'one random
thought
now multiplied'

Splendid!

Ben Ditty said...

Like how you switched up the traditional 5-7-5.

Chèvrefeuille said...

What a great haiku and pi-ku. So well done on the prompt "think". Lovely picture too.

Amber said...

This is something every human goes through I'm sure!
You make every reader relate to your writings. Lovely! :)

Mama Zen said...

I know how this feels! Great job!

Old Ollie said...

very good - I like how it has maney layers/ideas to explore...

Karen said...

Try meditating! A terrific haiku - pi-ku combo.

sonsylass said...

How true, Susie :-)

Susie Clevenger said...

Thanks for the wonderful comments..my brain seems to always be thinking...insomnia and I know each other well.

Concerned, Confused but Learning said...

Most people think all the time about random stuff. If only we could focus !!

Someone is Special said...

one random thought can multiply to many.. Loved your Pi-Ku and Haiku..

Someone is Special

wordcoaster said...

Very clever--using the Pi-ku to talk about multiplying thoughts :)