Wednesday, February 22, 2012

The Haiku Challenge Day #23 ~ Giving Them Her Joy


the joy of my mom
loving hands creating
beautiful artwork

beautiful artwork
for trio of little girls
their blue eyes watching

their blue eyes watching
stitches with priceless memories
the joy of my mom


©Susie Clevenger 2012
For Mama and her trio
Sharon, Debby, and Susie
29 Days of 29 Haiku
Today's Challenge: The Joy of Giving
Form: ABC, CDE, EFA

14 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh what a wonderful, happy, loving, joyous mom you had. So lucky, Susie! And I'll bet you are the same with your kids, too.

Chèvrefeuille said...

Love these series of haiku. They are all wonderful. Loved reading this contribution to The Haiku Challenge.

Grace said...

How sweet is this picture and your family ~ Thanks for sharing this family portrait ~

(I have to say though, that you can still revise this to follow the pattern requested - ABC, CDE, EFA) ~

Grace said...

Very lovely set..and I like that you shared a family photo of your family..how cute you little girls look ~

Just a little tweak, if you don't mind, or just ignore me..he..he..I am just being fussy:

the joy of my mom
her loving hands creating
beautiful artwork

beautiful artwork
for trio of little girls
their blue eyes watching

their blue eyes watching
stitches with pink memories
the joy of my mom

And this post made me sentimental of my mom and us 3 sis ~

Ellecee said...

What a lovely tribute to your Mother.

Asni said...

Such sweet priceless memories. Thank you for sharing.

Cloaked Monk/Terri said...

This fills my heart.

Gemma Wiseman said...

Beautiful sentiments gently admiring the wonder of your mum!

Ramesh Sood said...

Susie..an applause from me.. loved it..beautiful ..nostalgic..

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Ohw...That's sweet....A beautiful haiku about a family <3

beccagivens said...

Such a tender sweet tribute to your mom, Susie. Thank you for sharing your memories. Here is my Day 23.

Vidya Sury said...

Beautiful verse. Your haiku is so poignant.

Mark Windham said...

no one gives better than mom, very nice

Someone is Special said...

Beautiful Haiku Set Susie.. Wonderful mom...!