i wait on tiptoes
as I watch the sun rising
my day of dreams
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the dance of secrets
a shadow walk on tiptoe
discovery waits
love’s tiptoe vigil
waiting for a matching heart
doubt has no foothold
©Susie Clevenger 2012
Photographs: Favim
15 comments:
All of them are beautifully done.
beautiful tiptoe haiku...i like that doubt has no foothold ~
Very beautiful post ~ visual and words ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH
I enjoyed this so much that I didn't even realize it was the hated (by me) haiku, until I saw the tag. Wonderful combination of beautiful images and gentle words... the perfect combination for a weekend morning!
Hello Susie, I love these haiku and those pictures ... wonderful.
These are all wonderful! I really enjoyed the first best.
The tiptoe vigil can sometimes be a lonely one...
Shadowy Path
I thank each of you for your wonderful comments.@.Fireblossom so thankful you enjoyed the "hated" haiku :)
My favorite is the second. Wonderful imagery.
lovely
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Beautiful! All three. Love the second one best - dance of secrets. That's magical to me.
very well written haiku and pictures are so enchanting.
I love your use of pictures with your wonderful Haiku!
you never fail to disappoint! lovely set of tip toeing!
these are lovely, and excellent photos matched up
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