"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Saturday, January 21, 2012

TipToe


i wait on tiptoes
as I watch the sun rising
my day of dreams
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the dance of secrets
a shadow walk on tiptoe
discovery waits

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love’s tiptoe vigil
waiting for a matching heart
doubt has no foothold


©Susie Clevenger 2012
Photographs: Favim

15 comments :

anthonynorth said...

All of them are beautifully done.

Grace said...

beautiful tiptoe haiku...i like that doubt has no foothold ~

Carol L McKenna said...

Very beautiful post ~ visual and words ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH

Fireblossom said...

I enjoyed this so much that I didn't even realize it was the hated (by me) haiku, until I saw the tag. Wonderful combination of beautiful images and gentle words... the perfect combination for a weekend morning!

Chèvrefeuille said...

Hello Susie, I love these haiku and those pictures ... wonderful.

Teresa said...

These are all wonderful! I really enjoyed the first best.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

The tiptoe vigil can sometimes be a lonely one...

Shadowy Path

Susie Clevenger said...

I thank each of you for your wonderful comments.@.Fireblossom so thankful you enjoyed the "hated" haiku :)

Judith Westerfield said...

My favorite is the second. Wonderful imagery.

zongrik said...

lovely

http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/01/four tiptoe senryu

Hazel said...

Beautiful! All three. Love the second one best - dance of secrets. That's magical to me.

Ruchi Jain said...

very well written haiku and pictures are so enchanting.

MyWordsWhisper said...

I love your use of pictures with your wonderful Haiku!

becca givens said...

you never fail to disappoint! lovely set of tip toeing!

Blossom Vydrina said...

these are lovely, and excellent photos matched up

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