Thursday, September 8, 2011

Remote~Haiku


the mountain remote
i yearn for its solitude
the traffic deafens



©Susie Clevenger 2011
 Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 days
Prompt Day 9: Yearn

10 comments:

Rekha said...

The call of the heights... :) beautifully said.

Ron. said...

Great photo. Sparseness of sryle and image enhance to overall effect and intent.

vivinfrance said...

I feel for you. Noise is pollution. Mountains are sanity.

Nanka said...

Yearning for some peace but it seems to be crowded!! Everyone going up there?? :)

Cheryl said...

This I know. Beautiful haiku.

mjshorts said...

A lovely haiku.
Something worth yearning for - peace and quiet, solitude of lonely mountain peak. Great.

Leo said...

I wish to join you.. the daily traffic of life is messing with my mind and I yearn for a break to escape this!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

If ever you stop this yearning, you will be less than you truly are.

Some Yearning Here

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

when you leave can I come with you? I could love a little solitude too!

Marsha said...

Nature always soothes the ravages of the daily beast.