Remote~Haiku


the mountain remote
i yearn for its solitude
the traffic deafens



©Susie Clevenger 2011
 Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 days
Prompt Day 9: Yearn

Comments

Rekha said…
The call of the heights... :) beautifully said.
Ron. said…
Great photo. Sparseness of sryle and image enhance to overall effect and intent.
vivinfrance said…
I feel for you. Noise is pollution. Mountains are sanity.
Nanka said…
Yearning for some peace but it seems to be crowded!! Everyone going up there?? :)
Cheryl said…
This I know. Beautiful haiku.
Anonymous said…
A lovely haiku.
Something worth yearning for - peace and quiet, solitude of lonely mountain peak. Great.
Vinay Leo R. said…
I wish to join you.. the daily traffic of life is messing with my mind and I yearn for a break to escape this!
If ever you stop this yearning, you will be less than you truly are.

Some Yearning Here
Anonymous said…
when you leave can I come with you? I could love a little solitude too!
Marsha said…
Nature always soothes the ravages of the daily beast.