Thursday, September 15, 2011

Love Chime


love struck my heartbeat
a chime reviving the hope
romance is not dead


©Susie Clevenger
Height of Haiku Challenge
September-30 Haikus in 30 Days
Prompt Day 16: Chime





12 comments:

Leo said...

I wonder if such a love can ever fall. I hope and pray not! It is divine!

Gemma Wiseman said...

Beautiful metaphor in that first line setting the moment of the haiku!

Shauna said...

sweet haiku and pic.

wordcoaster said...

Wonderful use of the prompt--like the photo as well :)

Amity said...

Beautiful thoughts and I love it!

This must be a great love story!

Ron. said...

Line from a '60s song: ...a distant bell starts chiming love...

Love your work, SC!

Nanka said...

Lovely tinkling strains in the heart!! Nice chimes to hear!!

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful haiku!

poetry-diary.com said...

I'm glad it chimed. Always sad when it doesn't.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Lovely my friend. Let us hope love comes through.


Melanie

Judith Westerfield said...

Love struck my heart beat. wonderful line

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

This is just a lovely little word picture!

Chimes here and here and here