tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post8923976979537997061..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Metal ThroatSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-38895632643431900292015-01-12T09:06:46.908-06:002015-01-12T09:06:46.908-06:00This is exquisite, Susie, and really has the mood ...This is exquisite, Susie, and really has the mood and sharp, imaginative language that Huerta seems to have been into--you make it your own, and the line you work from comes to life. Beautiful.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-29213129161276216672015-01-12T06:57:13.243-06:002015-01-12T06:57:13.243-06:00That is a sensitive write. Such a song has a melan...That is a sensitive write. Such a song has a melancholic comfort to it... the comfort in being shrouded by it.<br />Some great phrases like "the funnel of a gravel voiced rocker" and "she lets agony devour numb".<br />Great job.HAhttp://howanxious.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-65479635570757917172015-01-12T04:30:19.060-06:002015-01-12T04:30:19.060-06:00I can relate to this. I took to the road, listenin...I can relate to this. I took to the road, listening to the radio, arguing with myself, wondering if I could forgive, "singing a duet with pain"...this is so real.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-37115526992190741272015-01-11T20:12:23.200-06:002015-01-11T20:12:23.200-06:00The imagery that trails through this is vivid and ...The imagery that trails through this is vivid and to hear the music how it inspired you as well...powerful writing, Susie. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-63056262305146362112015-01-11T19:52:05.564-06:002015-01-11T19:52:05.564-06:00Powerful, Susie.......the fog and tears and the vo...Powerful, Susie.......the fog and tears and the voice of the "gravel-voiced rocker".....really well done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-79747845661394943532015-01-11T19:43:35.926-06:002015-01-11T19:43:35.926-06:00Songs in a car can be amazingly powerful. You have...Songs in a car can be amazingly powerful. You have caught that here, Susie. The combination of the throat of the car and singer is very apt. Thanks. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-35766330751433866542015-01-11T16:15:30.598-06:002015-01-11T16:15:30.598-06:00Whew! I could see and feel it.
ZQWhew! I could see and feel it.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-27521736184348323702015-01-11T15:18:29.976-06:002015-01-11T15:18:29.976-06:00Amazingly well written. The combination of the voi...Amazingly well written. The combination of the voice of a rocker and the car with makes for perfect emagery. I can actually hear that voice with the pain it brings.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-52751860625802540862015-01-11T14:09:26.577-06:002015-01-11T14:09:26.577-06:00This poem is really complex. I loved the odd word ...This poem is really complex. I loved the odd word sequences that you used "gravel voiced rocker" for example. This part right here really helped define both the video that you posted with this, and the hard voice in which this poem is iterated. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44722238636482486002015-01-11T12:42:23.076-06:002015-01-11T12:42:23.076-06:00I admire the title, metal throat, and that gravele...I admire the title, metal throat, and that graveled note of agony devouring the numb ~ The singing a duet with pain is palpable ~<br /><br />Thanks for participating with Sunday Challenge Susie and wishing you happy weekend ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com