tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post880155586332720659..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Take The MoonSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-37108484296487165102014-08-26T11:05:51.314-05:002014-08-26T11:05:51.314-05:00If I read this correctly, it isn't always easy...If I read this correctly, it isn't always easy to let go … but obviously, sometimes it is for the best to step into another's line of vision. It IS hard to let go of some memories, old "loves"…. A twisting maze of a poem, for sure - Nice surprise ending (if I understand it correctly)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-37598929455028779802014-08-25T10:01:49.730-05:002014-08-25T10:01:49.730-05:00Each section of this poem is perfectly constructed...Each section of this poem is perfectly constructed. You achieve an amazing sense of balance between dark and light in your poetry, Susie.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-10498237939267903112014-08-25T05:17:42.478-05:002014-08-25T05:17:42.478-05:00this is a bit of a maze, isn't it? it's ve...this is a bit of a maze, isn't it? it's very effective, Susie.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-7246155654167331092014-08-24T22:10:20.905-05:002014-08-24T22:10:20.905-05:00I like the division creating many pathways and the...I like the division creating many pathways and the last few lines adding a mystery to it...a perfect maze..Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-34571090997819815612014-08-24T22:05:03.671-05:002014-08-24T22:05:03.671-05:00The ending surprised me too despite the hints of l...The ending surprised me too despite the hints of loss and substitution earlier. I thought someone did something to the speaker. Ha! Good one.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-89601201317353484272014-08-24T19:51:20.248-05:002014-08-24T19:51:20.248-05:00That's a tough place to be...between a person&...That's a tough place to be...between a person's smile and their anger. But you are very clear that you still want to see your reflection in those blue eyes...very poignant, Susie.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-11067166652875533592014-08-24T19:16:57.191-05:002014-08-24T19:16:57.191-05:00A wonderful and interesting piece.
ZQA wonderful and interesting piece.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-46242641744054012642014-08-24T19:16:43.058-05:002014-08-24T19:16:43.058-05:00The ending verse caught me by surprise ~ I love i...The ending verse caught me by surprise ~ I love it Susie ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-75995386023479266752014-08-24T19:15:23.059-05:002014-08-24T19:15:23.059-05:00I especially like the first stanza.I especially like the first stanza.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-35253389827251243982014-08-24T17:24:56.114-05:002014-08-24T17:24:56.114-05:00Hi Susie, that's a lovely poem, thanks for sha...Hi Susie, that's a lovely poem, thanks for sharing.DeniseinVAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08494518513936310345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-9351425006913059712014-08-24T17:20:52.891-05:002014-08-24T17:20:52.891-05:00I had to think here for a bit, Susie. Then I deci...I had to think here for a bit, Susie. Then I decided that the last line is appropriate. You wrote it so nice and smooth. <br /><br />Been there, done that and more. All kinds of mixed emotions enter into the mind and heart and they really don't go away. Ever, I am thinking, now 46 years later.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.com