tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post854275366958396639..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Kaleidoscopic SpiralSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58433321585465691382012-03-18T12:26:45.468-05:002012-03-18T12:26:45.468-05:00beautiful, Susie...
"My mind turns in kaleid...beautiful, Susie...<br /><br />"My mind turns in kaleidoscopic thoughts.<br />of purple surrender and yellow denial.<br />Black and white reality swirls into gray<br />where my determination is lost in the fog."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-64517401084349731332012-03-17T20:49:21.330-05:002012-03-17T20:49:21.330-05:00My hesitancy builds its case,
writes it summation ...My hesitancy builds its case,<br />writes it summation in my brain.<br /><br /><br />Really liked these and the image is stunning. Also enjoyed how you played with color in the beginning. <br /><br />Stepped away from the edge. :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-38789413641559655292012-03-17T20:22:48.098-05:002012-03-17T20:22:48.098-05:00Felt like i was swirling down a drain while on mor...Felt like i was swirling down a drain while on morphine. Great images, great lines...the last two lines particularly effective and hard hitting. Yeah baby...loved this.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-9667788062315677002012-03-17T12:40:39.178-05:002012-03-17T12:40:39.178-05:00Great photograph to reflect your message on perspe...Great photograph to reflect your message on perspective here, and it proceeds in a measured spiral through your strong images of tension to(temporary)resolution. Esp liked the third stanza '..moments pile in sand dunes..' is a great visual.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-33656983445915841482012-03-17T11:28:24.777-05:002012-03-17T11:28:24.777-05:00I liked all of this...the photo and your words...e...I liked all of this...the photo and your words...excellent!Geraldinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01541033372574718987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-26720042822557101312012-03-17T11:23:54.079-05:002012-03-17T11:23:54.079-05:00Oh, that's a gripping write. Sorry for the ba...Oh, that's a gripping write. Sorry for the bad pun, I really do find this compelling.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-30948167673974507892012-03-17T11:14:13.760-05:002012-03-17T11:14:13.760-05:00This gave me a bit of a shiver! Great write!This gave me a bit of a shiver! Great write!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-78028606121963032512012-03-17T04:21:15.723-05:002012-03-17T04:21:15.723-05:00You have captured confusion felt when the future s...You have captured confusion felt when the future seems uncertain. I felt a rising sense of panic as I read these lines.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-69653746281924981742012-03-16T22:31:16.769-05:002012-03-16T22:31:16.769-05:00I think you nailed this! Lots of imagery and feel...I think you nailed this! Lots of imagery and feeling but leaves each of us to "fill in the blank" with our own temptation(s). Nicely done!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-42197672758497722022012-03-16T21:41:23.129-05:002012-03-16T21:41:23.129-05:00Stepping back, seeing the spiral from a different ...Stepping back, seeing the spiral from a different perspective—perfect, Susie.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-20495228725756332842012-03-16T21:17:21.319-05:002012-03-16T21:17:21.319-05:00This is very nicely done, well crafted, and your p...This is very nicely done, well crafted, and your phrases evoke a lot of emotions and images. Love this!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-89796150525959942142012-03-16T21:07:52.687-05:002012-03-16T21:07:52.687-05:00Great writing....one step at a time - way to keep ...Great writing....one step at a time - way to keep on keeping on!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-60851837209206787072012-03-16T19:06:37.777-05:002012-03-16T19:06:37.777-05:00I love 'kaleidescope thoughts of purple surren...I love 'kaleidescope thoughts of purple surrender and yellow denial'... swirled with reality and determination... and finally the last line, freedom. This sounds like a great formula for getting through life's struggles, Susie.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-3660790548048441922012-03-16T18:50:08.322-05:002012-03-16T18:50:08.322-05:00Sometimes a temporary victory is all that one can ...Sometimes a temporary victory is all that one can achieve at the moment. But one can continue to achieve another and another. Fine write, Susie.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-48243586393921239202012-03-16T18:22:12.456-05:002012-03-16T18:22:12.456-05:00Writes it's summation in my brain...
Very goo...Writes it's summation in my brain...<br /><br />Very good line!<br /><br />I am very glad your stopped you, the world would be a much dimmer place otherwise!<br /><br />WanderWanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.com