tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post7091871866362648211..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Ride the BeatSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-79284699546238236042012-12-27T20:26:14.088-06:002012-12-27T20:26:14.088-06:00Tap dancing hearts vs the things your body can do ...Tap dancing hearts vs the things your body can do when confronted with wobbly bass lines. Some great turns of phrase here.Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00598435920429591602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-87780502842624563182012-12-27T19:07:15.366-06:002012-12-27T19:07:15.366-06:00Love it! Don't wait for a partner-just dance!Love it! Don't wait for a partner-just dance!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-30041542822265802172012-12-27T17:22:53.658-06:002012-12-27T17:22:53.658-06:00You outdone yourself on this one. Great write.You outdone yourself on this one. Great write.Susie Swansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06052734156809316397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-43690463008176630992012-12-27T13:10:51.894-06:002012-12-27T13:10:51.894-06:00I love the tone here, brief, beating, and strong i...I love the tone here, brief, beating, and strong in its character. I too liked the third stanza, in particular calling into the question the shortness of the parenthetical order. Well done and thanks for participating in the Out of Standard prompt!!!!Isadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-36277748827316567322012-12-27T12:51:16.292-06:002012-12-27T12:51:16.292-06:00Love this portion:
"Life is
too fleeting
in ...Love this portion:<br /><br />"Life is<br />too fleeting<br />in its<br />parenthesis<br />to stay<br />glued<br />inside lines<br />drawn<br />by judgment's<br />hand."<br /><br />Great writing!! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-55004866196864951272012-12-27T12:45:07.623-06:002012-12-27T12:45:07.623-06:00such a great message,keep on dancingsuch a great message,keep on dancingLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-63941371324187735302012-12-27T11:52:32.311-06:002012-12-27T11:52:32.311-06:00LOVE THIS!!!!! Especially the last stanza! "b...LOVE THIS!!!!! Especially the last stanza! "beyond expectation" - yes!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-52564542933695885522012-12-27T11:18:58.371-06:002012-12-27T11:18:58.371-06:00gosh, susie, that third stanza! kudos!gosh, susie, that third stanza! kudos!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-81119289658436324162012-12-27T09:53:39.562-06:002012-12-27T09:53:39.562-06:00Yes, this is a strong call for individuality. I pa...Yes, this is a strong call for individuality. I particularly love the thoughts you expressed in the third stanza. Really cool.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-82538971004575126752012-12-27T07:20:56.489-06:002012-12-27T07:20:56.489-06:00“Ride the beat with thumping thoughts reverberatin...“Ride the beat with thumping thoughts reverberating inside your seclusion”<br />I hear poems when there’s no one there<br /><br />”Let it take your heart… to.. eclectic expression”<br />Hearts bursting in air, gave proof through the night<br /><br />“Life is too fleeting in its parenthesis to stay glued inside lines…”<br />Footloose… kick off your Sunday shoes<br /><br />“..break into solo steps…”<br /><br />It isn’t raining rain, you know, it’s raining solo steps <br /><br /><br />So when you see goats upon the hill….<br />Your poem inspired me.<br /><br />Randy<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-59661665353388767112012-12-27T04:53:12.351-06:002012-12-27T04:53:12.351-06:00Letting go of "judgement's hand" to ...Letting go of "judgement's hand" to go solo! Wow.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-72534136196493876402012-12-27T04:41:02.454-06:002012-12-27T04:41:02.454-06:00*lines drawn by judgement's hand*
Ooo....I LO...*lines drawn by judgement's hand*<br /><br />Ooo....I LOVE that! A perfect fit!<br /><br />But my favorite-favorite is *foreign drum*......oh, how I am so happy to embrace that beat.........<br /><br />Have a creative New Year!<br />I look forward to reading your work in 2013!<br /><br />All Hail the Dubstep Goat!<br />(who knew?)<br />lol<br /><br />*hugs*<br /><br />Mimi<br />The Goat BorrowerMimi Foxmortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13572725659728049534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-69882045110858772062012-12-27T03:40:35.927-06:002012-12-27T03:40:35.927-06:00What a clever write. Love the thoughts of moving w...What a clever write. Love the thoughts of moving with the times as well as in time.<br />And isn't that a splendid example of the sound and dance. So nicely understated.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-90786194911386148662012-12-26T23:45:42.472-06:002012-12-26T23:45:42.472-06:00The third stanza is outstanding! (Don't live ...The third stanza is outstanding! (Don't live in) ... & solo steps can be quite excellent. NIce take on this challenge... one I couldn't wrap any creativity around at all (I did try though) Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.com