tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post6576588127557690916..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Bouquets of IronySusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-54771558287960314232016-05-06T10:53:32.708-05:002016-05-06T10:53:32.708-05:00Bouquets of irony! This is really unsettling, a bi...Bouquets of irony! This is really unsettling, a bit mysterious, fascinating.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-31812786334237539292016-05-04T14:19:50.798-05:002016-05-04T14:19:50.798-05:00very earnest...the stitching...all of itvery earnest...the stitching...all of itAngiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413074557542736813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-17774122570256204262016-05-04T13:20:01.487-05:002016-05-04T13:20:01.487-05:00Susie -- You weave together both beauty and sadnes...Susie -- You weave together both beauty and sadness...your last lines still lingering with me. Thanks for sharing. StacieStacie Eirichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13889951415294858821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-64877842942233486642016-05-04T12:14:16.912-05:002016-05-04T12:14:16.912-05:00Your writing always astounds me, but this one even...Your writing always astounds me, but this one even more so. Brilliant writing, Susie........the closing lines especially sew the poem up to perfection. Smiles. You are writing in your full power these days! Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-77919218769867487592016-05-04T11:33:30.305-05:002016-05-04T11:33:30.305-05:00I like your 'six feet under' cliche, Susie...I like your 'six feet under' cliche, Susie. Very appropriate place to keep what of him is still lingering around in your (poet's) haunts. <br />Been there, done that. There is an old CW song, "Thank God and Greyhound, she's gone." My ex's 4th husband was a keeper for her or she gave up looking for what wasn't there or whatever. Plus they moved to West Texas. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-69203802815583205432016-05-04T05:41:34.856-05:002016-05-04T05:41:34.856-05:00I hate to sew, yet here I sit stitching wounds….
p...I hate to sew, yet here I sit stitching wounds….<br />praying I have enough thread.<br /><br />To think there is not enough fodder to counter the long-standing unfairness imposed by the inconsiderate male. Great lines Susie!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-38669342207365044442016-05-03T16:18:05.095-05:002016-05-03T16:18:05.095-05:00Wow, quiet a bit of emotion in this. It has the pa...Wow, quiet a bit of emotion in this. It has the palpable gravitas of a funeral. Loved. Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58954706654379260122016-05-03T11:22:44.229-05:002016-05-03T11:22:44.229-05:00WOW, Susie...just WOW! You had me at "surroun...WOW, Susie...just WOW! You had me at "surrounded by all the roses you never gave me."Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-54251630031516303022016-05-03T10:54:45.014-05:002016-05-03T10:54:45.014-05:00"A depth of six feet requires too many choice..."A depth of six feet requires too many choices…"<br /><br />Goodness that hit me so hard.Raivennehttp://wp.me/pPury-1Ihnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-46624214871054639032016-05-03T10:44:59.931-05:002016-05-03T10:44:59.931-05:00Susie, trust you to come up with the phrase: a bou...Susie, trust you to come up with the phrase: a bouquet of irony!<br />I am so in envy right now.<br />This is just amazing work with the intimations of death abounding.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-76077788593285552972016-05-03T05:23:31.775-05:002016-05-03T05:23:31.775-05:00Such a quietly ironic way to express deep grief. F...Such a quietly ironic way to express deep grief. Flowers mocking and the thread loosely connecting with The Fates.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-40364817664187346022016-05-03T05:13:27.933-05:002016-05-03T05:13:27.933-05:00The last few lines are so perfect for that sadness...The last few lines are so perfect for that sadness of being deceived...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com