tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post4366980093462536727..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Poem StarsSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-19528632737596981062018-02-17T01:13:25.515-06:002018-02-17T01:13:25.515-06:00every stanza is so fluid and complete in its own, ...every stanza is so fluid and complete in its own, you have delved into the soul of this painting and given us a blueprint of her hopes.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11492243429734804802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-45158664344832249422018-02-15T23:38:03.435-06:002018-02-15T23:38:03.435-06:00How beautifully you have expressed this...and...cu...How beautifully you have expressed this...and...cupped in moon shadow....I loved that!!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-49498478672722842002018-02-15T21:02:13.870-06:002018-02-15T21:02:13.870-06:00I read this as someone who has or is healing - whe...I read this as someone who has or is healing - where she is now safe - no longer needing to hide but can seek peace slowly and safely. I'm glad you saw her work and I too keep tiptoeing back to dVerse - I want to make more time for them and IGWRT's. Both awesome places. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-7705671329071900222018-02-15T13:22:53.941-06:002018-02-15T13:22:53.941-06:00Your "poem star" has a wonderful dreamy ...Your "poem star" has a wonderful dreamy abode, envy of many poets. So sweet even that the stinging thorn wounds don't leave stars. Treat her nice. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-14161639021183337732018-02-15T04:28:01.540-06:002018-02-15T04:28:01.540-06:00You have captured a very interesting poet indeed.You have captured a very interesting poet indeed.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-68791287036410347452018-02-14T21:14:36.910-06:002018-02-14T21:14:36.910-06:00the indigo sky whispering keats in her ear...what ...the indigo sky whispering keats in her ear...what a magical image that is...Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-27367838201290556652018-02-14T20:46:03.291-06:002018-02-14T20:46:03.291-06:00I like the description of dreams where "stone...I like the description of dreams where "stones<br />carry no weight".Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-57168585694452006152018-02-14T17:14:45.568-06:002018-02-14T17:14:45.568-06:00Cupped in moon shadow
she blooms in the sting of t...Cupped in moon shadow<br />she blooms in the sting of thorns<br /><br />How blessed that she is so protected!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-89621980033296670842018-02-14T15:06:22.692-06:002018-02-14T15:06:22.692-06:00I think there are those of us who hear the poetry ...I think there are those of us who hear the poetry of stars... I can so see the poet in her.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16534942295855655582018-02-14T14:08:07.717-06:002018-02-14T14:08:07.717-06:00I love,
'While others sleep she sits
among po...I love,<br /><br />'While others sleep she sits<br />among poem stars peeking<br />through an ink stained sky.'<br /><br />Gorgeous!purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-83469297225145849652018-02-14T10:23:22.919-06:002018-02-14T10:23:22.919-06:00Resting so close to far away
the night song of ind...Resting so close to far away<br />the night song of indigo <br />sings Keats into her ear. That is so beautiful. One I wish I could have writtenDebi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-50190978827786824062018-02-14T09:34:24.452-06:002018-02-14T09:34:24.452-06:00I like how you describe the dreamer in the image! ...I like how you describe the dreamer in the image! The third stanza doesn't fit as well for me...could be deleted? Just my thoughts!lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-3261899317022474302018-02-14T08:43:28.043-06:002018-02-14T08:43:28.043-06:00Well, I wish you were sitting here with me as I...Well, I wish you were sitting here with me as I'm sipping my second cup of coffee -- becaue then you would have heard my audible "ohhhhh" as I read the last words of your poem. This is a wonderful interpretation of the image! So VERY glad you returned to dVerse (thank you Margaret for leading the way) and posted this! Come back often! lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-66161741493668888172018-02-14T05:31:09.382-06:002018-02-14T05:31:09.382-06:00'While others sleep she sits among poem stars ...'While others sleep she sits among poem stars peeking through an ink stained sky'.. my goodness this is to absolutely die for!😍😍Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-39517440252270404272018-02-14T04:20:14.215-06:002018-02-14T04:20:14.215-06:00How beautifully you have imagined her, matching th...How beautifully you have imagined her, matching the delicacy and mystery of the artwork.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-71469609105029216592018-02-14T03:02:36.644-06:002018-02-14T03:02:36.644-06:00I think, as poets, we all have a nest of dreams. I...I think, as poets, we all have a nest of dreams. I love the phrase 'stones carry no weight' and the image painted in:<br />'While others sleep she sits<br />among poem stars peeking<br />through an ink stained sky'<br />and<br />'she blooms in the sting of thorns<br />without the sorrow of collecting scars'.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.com