tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post3785262278936598905..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: A Touch of TheaterSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-15275989604222382342012-08-11T05:16:23.713-05:002012-08-11T05:16:23.713-05:00A nicely observed narrative.A nicely observed narrative.Dick Joneshttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-66749952961646169552012-08-09T09:22:12.061-05:002012-08-09T09:22:12.061-05:00Such excellent words and haunting syllables when o...Such excellent words and haunting syllables when one discovers love is gone.21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-11023294459441997632012-08-09T01:54:50.354-05:002012-08-09T01:54:50.354-05:00What insight you have captured here. Well done.What insight you have captured here. Well done.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-19779074591868836662012-08-08T05:36:28.550-05:002012-08-08T05:36:28.550-05:00Sharply observed piece - well done.Sharply observed piece - well done.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-25863667243121636982012-08-07T22:07:44.036-05:002012-08-07T22:07:44.036-05:00Very well written! A great performance!Very well written! A great performance!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-19945408485563184482012-08-07T21:53:14.173-05:002012-08-07T21:53:14.173-05:00Susie, this is so very clever and sadly true to li...Susie, this is so very clever and sadly true to life for many.Ravenhttp://nohwhere.wordpress.com/2012/08/06/magpie-tales-129/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-29775542195136082792012-08-07T16:56:38.497-05:002012-08-07T16:56:38.497-05:00I especially like "staring at the red and fee...I especially like "staring at the red and feeling cold"...nice...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-48627261357026269822012-08-07T12:49:01.795-05:002012-08-07T12:49:01.795-05:00a wonderfully written (& yes, sad) poem - i lo...a wonderfully written (& yes, sad) poem - i love <br /><br />"Their marriage had died<br />but their pride insisted<br />its obituary not be published."<br /><br />... & the first & final stanzas are positively brilliant, SusieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-46665299648545323772012-08-07T11:57:03.796-05:002012-08-07T11:57:03.796-05:00Sad poem Susy, very well done.Sad poem Susy, very well done.Tigerbritenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-70917416199936666592012-08-07T10:41:00.018-05:002012-08-07T10:41:00.018-05:00Too many lives are lived this way, and far too man...Too many lives are lived this way, and far too many forget why they first married. <br /><br />I love the opening line... "She dressed for boredom."<br /><br />I have been there and done that far too many times. I finally learned to say "NO" this year.PammyMcBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03390470165740162456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-4083339031034779472012-08-07T06:40:50.173-05:002012-08-07T06:40:50.173-05:00How many marriages there are, with unpublished obi...How many marriages there are, with unpublished obituaries...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-4257789068879075372012-08-07T05:19:17.579-05:002012-08-07T05:19:17.579-05:00A sad commentary on some marriages!A sad commentary on some marriages!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-83796349374514349222012-08-06T21:34:53.807-05:002012-08-06T21:34:53.807-05:00Their marriage had died
but their pride insisted
i...Their marriage had died<br />but their pride insisted<br />its obituary not be published.<br /><br />We've all seen this.<br /><br />Nice write.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-86328409455020007862012-08-06T18:34:07.338-05:002012-08-06T18:34:07.338-05:00Sharing a few lines from an as yet unpublished pie...Sharing a few lines from an as yet unpublished piece, only because the fit so good with this story:<br /><br />"So keep the pretense, hold the guard up<br />to those outside looking in<br />our lives are perfect, <br />we’ve got the act down once again."<br /><br />To some, it's all about the show. Good capture, Susie!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16188730937850606932012-08-06T16:48:01.115-05:002012-08-06T16:48:01.115-05:00That first stanza is just brutal! Excellent write...That first stanza is just brutal! Excellent write.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-74852840548804968622012-08-06T15:27:34.041-05:002012-08-06T15:27:34.041-05:00long distance relationship in the same house....ug...long distance relationship in the same house....ugh...but you have to keep up the act to keep the neighbors from talking....what an existence....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-78229568669935735732012-08-06T15:22:06.565-05:002012-08-06T15:22:06.565-05:00...and she does this performance over and over aga......and she does this performance over and over again, and will till the day she dies, even if he dies before her and she does this alone. Pathetic life. :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com