tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post3403323778183740546..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Last Moments Before GoodbyeSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-80748614801685802392011-10-04T18:27:20.931-05:002011-10-04T18:27:20.931-05:00"taking each beat into my soul
to give me lif..."taking each beat into my soul<br />to give me life when you are gone." Beautifully done and expressed with raw emotion...love itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-25766520516722368472011-10-04T02:12:53.058-05:002011-10-04T02:12:53.058-05:00This is a beautiful write. A well captured moment....This is a beautiful write. A well captured moment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-53168679040386238122011-10-03T21:48:37.442-05:002011-10-03T21:48:37.442-05:00I hear the clock ticking it is time.
The sun has g...<i>I hear the clock ticking it is time.<br />The sun has grown dimmer.<br />Lonely has already arrived </i><br /><br />Oh how you've captured the moments!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47642380681719087982011-10-03T21:26:18.560-05:002011-10-03T21:26:18.560-05:00Goodbyes are the hardest thing to say and it is so...Goodbyes are the hardest thing to say and it is so sad when you are the one leaving and do not know when you will be back or on the other hand to stand there and watch the person walk out the door or get on a plane and fly away that is really hard to do and to say goodbye in the end<br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-51134650548457047942011-10-03T18:09:50.421-05:002011-10-03T18:09:50.421-05:00i loved the way you described the kiss...
and ya ...i loved the way you described the kiss...<br /><br />and ya the whole scene of the 'good-bye' was right befire my eyes as i read your poem... :)Almas Kiran Shamimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15490672837424765800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-11348757965012870082011-10-03T14:44:40.551-05:002011-10-03T14:44:40.551-05:00hot, sweet, and lovely.
:)hot, sweet, and lovely.<br /><br />:)Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-54789181052228898062011-10-03T10:25:24.824-05:002011-10-03T10:25:24.824-05:00This poem is moving and well done. It flows very ...This poem is moving and well done. It flows very easily down the page and draws me into it. <br />Love lost - desertion, death, treachery. It matters not. It is lost.<br /><br />Namaste..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-40093655025383045802011-10-03T09:30:04.762-05:002011-10-03T09:30:04.762-05:00Very poignant. well done.Very poignant. well done.Tigerbritenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-18864469071281813822011-10-03T09:17:19.940-05:002011-10-03T09:17:19.940-05:00Wow! This is a powerfully sad poem! Very well expr...Wow! This is a powerfully sad poem! Very well expressed emotion, Susie!<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-23577579836673004452011-10-03T08:23:40.024-05:002011-10-03T08:23:40.024-05:00Oh, I have felt this agony. You've depicted i...Oh, I have felt this agony. You've depicted it painfully well.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-85386743455455824182011-10-03T06:57:42.923-05:002011-10-03T06:57:42.923-05:00This is beautifully written
Susie. I like the sen...This is beautifully written <br />Susie. I like the sense of urgency throughout the poem, especially in the second last stanza<br />"I hear the clock ticking it is time.<br />The sun has grown dimmer.<br />Lonely has already arrived."Poetry and Icecreamhttp://www.normamartiri.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-34960195458496422292011-10-03T06:42:37.289-05:002011-10-03T06:42:37.289-05:00This poem leaves me with a lump in my throat. Suc...This poem leaves me with a lump in my throat. Such real emotion here! I can feel it as if I were in the room.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-9483612868629767182011-10-03T05:37:30.771-05:002011-10-03T05:37:30.771-05:00Beautifully written!Beautifully written!Sober on the Way to Sanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11521832804187424523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-6294328262940075112011-10-03T05:33:24.142-05:002011-10-03T05:33:24.142-05:00Dear Susie
Its so beautiful... and I could relate...Dear Susie<br /><br />Its so beautiful... and I could relate to it all... specially with you lines...<br /><br />'My lips seek yours<br />to taste the delicacy<br />of restrained passion.'<br /><br />Some times we do not realise how close we are to the bliss, but we keep trying to loose ourselves in openings.... meeting again and again but not taking it forward to the end that is ... the bliss... being forever together in thoughts, mind and sense... <br /><br />The sense of restraint is always felt when the lips tremble... <br /><br />You will find one haiku at my blog in this weeks post... <br /><br /><br />Thanks for sharing at Poetry Picnic WK 7… I look forward to reading more from you in our next week theme “Friends, relationships and everyone around”…<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/whispers-love-and-loss-butterfly.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-66671252624059849092011-10-03T02:14:56.553-05:002011-10-03T02:14:56.553-05:00The lead-up to departure is almost more painful th...The lead-up to departure is almost more painful than the actual going.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-22062721281056865022011-10-03T01:46:59.549-05:002011-10-03T01:46:59.549-05:00I read poignant lines Suzie and I could feel them ...I read poignant lines Suzie and I could feel them too!<br /><br />I hate goodbyes...and I mean it! :(<br /><br />But a goodbye is needed in order for friends to see each other again...Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.com