tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post245932421516315758..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: NaPoWriMo 2013 Day 27 ~ Black Suits and Bold LiesSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44539953721279594972013-04-30T09:18:50.780-05:002013-04-30T09:18:50.780-05:00OUCH! This poem is urgent and gorgeous. Perhaps ...OUCH! This poem is urgent and gorgeous. Perhaps Hannah should publish a book of these poems?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58144859724538462532013-04-28T08:51:33.710-05:002013-04-28T08:51:33.710-05:00Bravo...
The last line killed it!
I love it!
Bravo...<br />The last line killed it!<br />I love it!<br />Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-75123315154553481852013-04-28T01:54:27.782-05:002013-04-28T01:54:27.782-05:00The voice of this poem is so strong, Susie. I love...The voice of this poem is so strong, Susie. I love the transition from the first to last stanza - many ways to dress to kill.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16779510689418052362013-04-28T01:24:52.182-05:002013-04-28T01:24:52.182-05:00I learned more about frogs in one day than I'v...I learned more about frogs in one day than I've learned in my lifetime! Great poem, Susie ~~ that image is wild!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-87415179189226757532013-04-27T21:54:24.698-05:002013-04-27T21:54:24.698-05:00Fabulous write, Susie......"grain to feed the...Fabulous write, Susie......"grain to feed the immediate while leaving the future to starve". It could not be said better. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-70817140779599803912013-04-27T20:29:33.745-05:002013-04-27T20:29:33.745-05:00OH my word!! You rocked this prompt through and th...OH my word!! You rocked this prompt through and through!! <br /><br />You've delivered the frogs message, (plea), creatively, the tone and poignant punch of your awesome title cycling around to get us in the gut in the ending, yes!! <br /><br />I love your response...thank you so much Susie for writing!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-55326200863797020992013-04-27T19:18:06.670-05:002013-04-27T19:18:06.670-05:00Fabulous, Susie. That's telling it like it is....Fabulous, Susie. That's telling it like it is. "So what's one poisonous frog more or less?" I hate that there are still people who believe humanity was given dominion over the earth. Taking the Old Testament literally is just ridiculous.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-80926125281876564252013-04-27T17:18:39.653-05:002013-04-27T17:18:39.653-05:00So well done...the mission set out for us. Your ex...So well done...the mission set out for us. Your excellent expression of this beautiful frog's eventual demise. Agree with Margaret...Black suits and bold lies. Not just for frogs.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-80380503083794814842013-04-27T17:05:05.490-05:002013-04-27T17:05:05.490-05:00Very powerful expression of a frog's plea.Very powerful expression of a frog's plea.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-20130923154923871512013-04-27T16:15:29.255-05:002013-04-27T16:15:29.255-05:00Black suits and bold lies!! Killer line. And what...Black suits and bold lies!! Killer line. And what a handsome frog he is! Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.com