tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post155214727980932818..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Rustle Of OrangeSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-24824187215412277182014-11-03T08:17:40.215-06:002014-11-03T08:17:40.215-06:00I adore the whole beautiful poem - You have pluck...I adore the whole beautiful poem - You have plucked the essence of the color "orange" from its soul, I think. Wonderful hearing you read it ! Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-7771609296681129082014-10-28T10:09:38.490-05:002014-10-28T10:09:38.490-05:00Love the beautiful images of your poem, Susie. One...Love the beautiful images of your poem, Susie. One of my fav. lines "wondering if the robin’s song<br />still clings to its abandoned nest or has<br />the wind swallowed the memory of rebirth." <br /> Nice to hear you, reading the poem...the melancholia in the air... x<br />humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-86728863634658484322014-10-27T02:16:01.205-05:002014-10-27T02:16:01.205-05:00There is a sense of dread of losing the day light ...There is a sense of dread of losing the day light in this poem and already thinking about Spring.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-62538755345906366932014-10-26T23:40:29.314-05:002014-10-26T23:40:29.314-05:00I love the "beautiful landscape of dying"...I love the "beautiful landscape of dying"....your imagery in this poem is as vibrant as autumn itself.......love the closing lines so much!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-21658440099274866212014-10-26T23:01:22.199-05:002014-10-26T23:01:22.199-05:00Bravo! Dylan would cheer~
I love the depth and t...Bravo! Dylan would cheer~<br /><br />I love the depth and the way you painted our vision-beautifully done!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-41094241544507589042014-10-26T19:28:40.276-05:002014-10-26T19:28:40.276-05:00I love this reflection on the visuals you love so...I love this reflection on the visuals you love so much. I hear your artist's eye that sees shape and mass and life and death!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-2547271730785537402014-10-26T18:37:08.702-05:002014-10-26T18:37:08.702-05:00Beautiful!
ZQBeautiful!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-38274892356251192962014-10-26T16:21:32.127-05:002014-10-26T16:21:32.127-05:00I echo (Grandmother)Mary - your poem is a sensory ...I echo (Grandmother)Mary - your poem is a sensory delight.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-50328994574329081552014-10-26T15:29:02.189-05:002014-10-26T15:29:02.189-05:00after coming in from an out-door fall nap and read...after coming in from an out-door fall nap and reading this... totally was energized to write... this was a beautiful piece... whether you got the Dylan thing or not... it captured all the senses... great jobWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-19186717784775680572014-10-26T14:49:22.588-05:002014-10-26T14:49:22.588-05:00Beautifully written and read, Susie, (such a treat...Beautifully written and read, Susie, (such a treat to hear you read this!). I love this line, "In this beautiful landscape of dying" among many. :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-21395536427727768312014-10-26T11:21:29.982-05:002014-10-26T11:21:29.982-05:00I love this- the imagery is that of an artist and ...I love this- the imagery is that of an artist and your descriptions are unique- songs clinging to nests, wind swallowing memory, the sky as a cloud of wings, daylight between bookends of midnight and prayers for spring. Rich.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-14440684496049967412014-10-26T09:39:13.796-05:002014-10-26T09:39:13.796-05:00This is perfect for the mood today.. The bluesy fe...This is perfect for the mood today.. The bluesy feeling of a late autumn.. really something to give me some hope for tomorrow.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-75307048896601556422014-10-26T06:33:32.859-05:002014-10-26T06:33:32.859-05:00beautifully donebeautifully doneVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16007650773709413402014-10-26T02:55:52.632-05:002014-10-26T02:55:52.632-05:00This is the perfect poem for northern October! You...This is the perfect poem for northern October! Your use of juxtaposition is stellar:<br /><br />In this beautiful landscape of dying... <br /><br />I see the keen eye of observation and the rich palette of the poet in this piece, Susie.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com