tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post1113542434016287132..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Coffee, Tea, or WingsSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-76159129865193306722017-11-17T09:32:41.729-06:002017-11-17T09:32:41.729-06:00This really got me. The first stanza is wow... and...This really got me. The first stanza is wow... and then you come up with 'but within I am a tea of tipping points'... nice one :)Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-52735561639615569482017-11-17T03:11:49.948-06:002017-11-17T03:11:49.948-06:00Susie you have a superlative way with words - - ov...Susie you have a superlative way with words - - overflowing with contrary emotions but always at the well-spring of inspiration :"within I am a tea of tipping points" Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-21891240133529225282017-11-16T19:35:13.090-06:002017-11-16T19:35:13.090-06:00So many lines I loved in this but my two favorites...So many lines I loved in this but my two favorites are: "Morning arrives on dragonfly wings,..." and "My mind keeps writing script my spirit must edit." Really wonderful how the words danced with ideas throughoutMNL (Cactus Haiku)http://cactushaiku.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-53975191988253120792017-11-16T17:49:41.616-06:002017-11-16T17:49:41.616-06:00Who knows the person (creature) we are within for ...Who knows the person (creature) we are within for we all keep our secrets selves hidden. Great food for thought!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-8677523221258411512017-11-16T13:51:52.408-06:002017-11-16T13:51:52.408-06:00I like the idea of shifting selves and the ability...I like the idea of shifting selves and the ability to choose. And I particularly like the phrase, 'where worry tills stones'.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-32608792972768361782017-11-16T13:44:29.609-06:002017-11-16T13:44:29.609-06:00And having won, how long can it hold on before the...And having won, how long can it hold on before the next change?Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-24762752448702570892017-11-16T12:39:10.399-06:002017-11-16T12:39:10.399-06:00"My mind keeps writing script my spirit must ..."My mind keeps writing script my spirit must edit." Wow, Susie! Stellar. "A tea of tipping points" - I love it!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-81692582152891877522017-11-16T11:52:37.460-06:002017-11-16T11:52:37.460-06:00Third stanza is very true - and I like how you inc...Third stanza is very true - and I like how you incorporated the title of the artwork into your point- "tipping point"Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-15169382164955087432017-11-16T09:59:54.174-06:002017-11-16T09:59:54.174-06:00My goodness!💕 I absolutely adore the opening stan...My goodness!💕 I absolutely adore the opening stanza; "Morning arrives on dragonfly wings,<br />and I wonder who I’ll be when my coffee cup is empty." Sigh... beautiful penned, Susie!💕<br />Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com