tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post92212729960756735..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Where Are The FlowersSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-84809443064646625532013-01-26T12:07:10.819-06:002013-01-26T12:07:10.819-06:00Truly strong all the way through... so many awesom...Truly strong all the way through... so many awesome lines, I was grabbed with the first stanza - NEW it was going to be good and "Ribbon tied perjury,<br />sentenced to evening trash." A bad romance NEVER sounded so good :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-86254577410155459252013-01-25T20:46:14.568-06:002013-01-25T20:46:14.568-06:00Those last two stanzas are on fire! Love it!Those last two stanzas are on fire! Love it!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-17778389494360924452013-01-25T18:26:50.799-06:002013-01-25T18:26:50.799-06:00"entombed in
what the hell for."
Visio..."entombed in<br /> what the hell for."<br /><br />Vision and power, you sure captured that no nonsense take on the nonsense of things with the sass and the cadence and all. I totally enjoyed reading this!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-61066057151293282132013-01-25T16:52:36.460-06:002013-01-25T16:52:36.460-06:00OH, well done, Susie. Too true, too often.
KOH, well done, Susie. Too true, too often.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-79039251942140190722013-01-25T15:07:30.142-06:002013-01-25T15:07:30.142-06:00I was grabbed by the first stanza! Good job!I was grabbed by the first stanza! Good job!Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-18782745869528664462013-01-25T12:44:29.877-06:002013-01-25T12:44:29.877-06:00Nice, Susie!!! You gather the tone for sure and Iz...Nice, Susie!!! You gather the tone for sure and Izy and Marian...actually Keryy, too, mentioned my favorite parts! Great job!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-10654075109153580012013-01-25T10:57:46.355-06:002013-01-25T10:57:46.355-06:00Susie, this is really well done. Some saccharin, ...Susie, this is really well done. Some saccharin, some lullaby...all clever and well drafted. I really liked these lines:<br /><br />Store bought <br />cookie<br /> cutter romance<br />coloring up your<br /> lack of commitment.<br /><br />Here you provided such depth to a familiar concept. Well done and viva la<br />Isadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-12075619964059625212013-01-25T08:41:45.123-06:002013-01-25T08:41:45.123-06:00Susie! aaarrgghhhh i LOVE this poem, how wonderful...Susie! aaarrgghhhh i LOVE this poem, how wonderful! this? wow:<br />"Scented mummies entombed in what the hell for."<br />whoosh and yay!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-29222079877280895482013-01-25T08:37:04.095-06:002013-01-25T08:37:04.095-06:00Lies are always
prettier when they
hide in tissu...Lies are always<br /> prettier when they<br /> hide in tissue with<br /> a prewritten note...<br /><br />You struck the right chord with these lines, Susie.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-49861027620481478242013-01-25T08:36:29.979-06:002013-01-25T08:36:29.979-06:00you've really captured the feel, well doneyou've really captured the feel, well done LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-36585325574373321582013-01-25T06:28:52.541-06:002013-01-25T06:28:52.541-06:00Ouch. This is so full of feeling. I love the word ...Ouch. This is so full of feeling. I love the word play (empty vases gather dust in a broken love story) and the images you present. Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-77304064500320978202013-01-25T05:49:03.288-06:002013-01-25T05:49:03.288-06:00Some great lines there....loved itSome great lines there....loved itSreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-76661241437894220192013-01-25T05:29:36.084-06:002013-01-25T05:29:36.084-06:00Sweet. I can almost touch those flowers that dried...Sweet. I can almost touch those flowers that dried up in your words. :)GoddessChhavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13154853993554108461noreply@blogger.com