tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post865132042237426118..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Deserted ~ HaikuSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-12451820196219154712012-04-07T16:30:10.675-05:002012-04-07T16:30:10.675-05:00one of my favorite haikus you have written, separa...one of my favorite haikus you have written, separate images brought together as one, from the sky to the street.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-18398925891482230282012-04-06T01:52:28.294-05:002012-04-06T01:52:28.294-05:00Love the imagery, Susie!! :)Love the imagery, Susie!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16767493517907467392012-04-05T17:07:33.634-05:002012-04-05T17:07:33.634-05:00I felt myself walking in the darkness too, and dar...I felt myself walking in the darkness too, and darker still when you use the word "ebony". A special haiku.Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-29105206269935527112012-04-05T14:49:48.271-05:002012-04-05T14:49:48.271-05:00I love reading your poems on here even if I mostly...I love reading your poems on here even if I mostly read on Facebook :)Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-63388326643328613102012-04-05T11:53:16.598-05:002012-04-05T11:53:16.598-05:00Beautiful image in words - I could see the whole n...Beautiful image in words - I could see the whole night scene so clearly.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-5342865048516844032012-04-05T02:36:42.024-05:002012-04-05T02:36:42.024-05:00Eerie and desolate using captivating imagery. Well...Eerie and desolate using captivating imagery. Well done. I like it.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-17589414234770849032012-04-05T02:15:30.762-05:002012-04-05T02:15:30.762-05:00Cool haiku. Really like how you incorporated a pr...Cool haiku. Really like how you incorporated a prevailing image. Darkness/deserted/shadow- very nicely done. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.com