tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post8374744575633960981..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Reality Wake MeSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-54307788492688210542011-10-17T21:52:04.849-05:002011-10-17T21:52:04.849-05:00Lovely verse - I think the butterfly is perfect fo...Lovely verse - I think the butterfly is perfect for your poem's content. And these "childish games of hope"... sigh, it seems we never quite outgrow them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-70707034384252394612011-10-17T20:49:12.512-05:002011-10-17T20:49:12.512-05:00shameless self induced heartbreak--i can relate to...shameless self induced heartbreak--i can relate to that one. well said, and imaginative.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-31518533467954489492011-10-17T18:56:37.134-05:002011-10-17T18:56:37.134-05:00very nice form and indeed reality wakes us up from...very nice form and indeed reality wakes us up from our playful games ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-2828457447978692922011-10-17T14:29:49.181-05:002011-10-17T14:29:49.181-05:00Even after knowing nothing will change...the child...Even after knowing nothing will change...the childish game somehow raises hope...but alas the reality always struck painfully<br />so true emotions embedded in your few lines :)Beyond Horizonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14670805648928048491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-2228682849498359382011-10-17T14:06:46.222-05:002011-10-17T14:06:46.222-05:00Aww... beautiful!Aww... beautiful!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-60692739604342793362011-10-17T12:15:49.486-05:002011-10-17T12:15:49.486-05:00So beautiul poem.Your poem sare always soft .I lov...So beautiul poem.Your poem sare always soft .I love them so much .<br />I did not know that you have a face book page too.Gonna be fan there too ;).<br />Have a good day .♥●• İzdihër •●♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/07824597580762719194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-57299788361182618972011-10-17T08:26:12.136-05:002011-10-17T08:26:12.136-05:00Very nice. I'll have to try this someday. You ...Very nice. I'll have to try this someday. You did a good job, it reads flowingly.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-79063560759398286542011-10-17T06:58:58.316-05:002011-10-17T06:58:58.316-05:00This form seems to embody the thoughts perfectly. ...This form seems to embody the thoughts perfectly. Such thoughts as one would hold dear, and secret, close to the heart. In other words: just beautiful.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-43411873937730794832011-10-16T22:54:22.041-05:002011-10-16T22:54:22.041-05:00Nicely done. Emotion conveyed thoughtfully and ar...Nicely done. Emotion conveyed thoughtfully and artfully thru your words.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-66078737360695107112011-10-16T21:03:23.317-05:002011-10-16T21:03:23.317-05:00Susie, visiting you from "Imaginary Gardens.&...Susie, visiting you from "Imaginary Gardens." Sometimes it is nice when reality awakens one, and sometimes it is good to just enjoy the dreams. Love this write, Susie.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-17792645682175313892011-10-16T20:35:19.124-05:002011-10-16T20:35:19.124-05:00wake up, susie! wake up!
love your cinquain. write...wake up, susie! wake up!<br />love your cinquain. write some more!!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-27947270278010401872011-10-16T20:26:14.399-05:002011-10-16T20:26:14.399-05:00What a gorgeous write! Beautiful use of the form....What a gorgeous write! Beautiful use of the form.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com