tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post7903482697867813217..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Jue Ju Times TwoSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-68606198902959720442012-10-22T19:51:05.842-05:002012-10-22T19:51:05.842-05:00Wow! Each poem's words are as strong as the p...Wow! Each poem's words are as strong as the photo images. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-34006794550019877362012-10-22T10:30:03.165-05:002012-10-22T10:30:03.165-05:00Absolutely intoxicating, especially the second pie...Absolutely intoxicating, especially the second piece.Tania Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17351618475728982428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-62252688176533714242012-10-22T09:29:10.040-05:002012-10-22T09:29:10.040-05:00I also loved the contrast in your poems ... the se...I also loved the contrast in your poems ... the second is spellbinding!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-25447360375816196952012-10-22T06:58:02.001-05:002012-10-22T06:58:02.001-05:00A bit of a somber tone...image captured will in yo...A bit of a somber tone...image captured will in your brevity and your second...yes, love the heat in this one...you created a strong feminine character in this one...great work on these!!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-8062175631085251232012-10-21T22:52:54.668-05:002012-10-21T22:52:54.668-05:00The oak leaf is such a great symbol. The last line...The oak leaf is such a great symbol. The last line says it all. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17254228974989688426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-73364109132626932032012-10-21T21:15:02.205-05:002012-10-21T21:15:02.205-05:00Such different poems, but I love them both! Such different poems, but I love them both! Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58044203688283040612012-10-21T21:14:11.633-05:002012-10-21T21:14:11.633-05:00Well done, Susie, well said. I love the sad beauty...Well done, Susie, well said. I love the sad beauty of the first poem and the outright honesty of the second.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44589194688579854802012-10-21T19:57:13.289-05:002012-10-21T19:57:13.289-05:00Such a contrast between the two--your second piece...Such a contrast between the two--your second piece is on fire--just fabulous!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-40924419696039008952012-10-21T19:03:16.933-05:002012-10-21T19:03:16.933-05:00Very nice. Awake for a dream.Very nice. Awake for a dream.Hannah Pratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241656929267868673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-42434955187481905252012-10-21T13:47:29.004-05:002012-10-21T13:47:29.004-05:00Strong pieces, Susie, from a strong woman. Awesome...Strong pieces, Susie, from a strong woman. Awesome offerings this Sunday morning - a rich feast! I love the leaf photo, by the way.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-826418724425873152012-10-21T12:44:19.913-05:002012-10-21T12:44:19.913-05:00Great contrast between these two, and it makes bot...Great contrast between these two, and it makes both of them stronger pairing them, I think. There is a lot of truth-telling in the second that really resonates for me, and you use the form well throughout--the word count being limited seems to make the images more vivid. Great work, Susie.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-48760843637871695802012-10-21T09:08:48.358-05:002012-10-21T09:08:48.358-05:00what a concept, "honest heat." that is e...what a concept, "honest heat." that is exactly right. very, very nice pieces.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44107013519778255362012-10-21T09:01:49.139-05:002012-10-21T09:01:49.139-05:00So impressed you managed to stay to the five words...So impressed you managed to stay to the five words per line.<br />Also the stanza being a proper syntax sentence. Well written and good to read.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-14580090272033308412012-10-21T08:45:39.737-05:002012-10-21T08:45:39.737-05:00I enjoyed both poems, Susie. The first expresses ...I enjoyed both poems, Susie. The first expresses the sadness of the end of autumn.<br /><br />And the second is rich with, shall we say, the heat of the moment!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58897314933068010752012-10-21T07:00:50.875-05:002012-10-21T07:00:50.875-05:00Lovely two pieces ~
I like the clear image of aut...Lovely two pieces ~<br /><br />I like the clear image of autumn in the first one, and the whew heat and passion in the second verse ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-70660302289685888722012-10-21T02:00:41.399-05:002012-10-21T02:00:41.399-05:00There is quite a contrast between these two pieces...There is quite a contrast between these two pieces, Susie, which shows your versatility as a writer. You have set a wistful tone in your Autumn piece, and then wowed us with your passionate feminine voice in the longer poem. I love that she is unapologetic and knows what she wants.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com