tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post7460680429233392321..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Beneath The Atchafalaya MoonSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-37932358917088770122014-05-03T20:33:01.339-05:002014-05-03T20:33:01.339-05:00Stunning story, I was enchanted till the end ~ Lo...Stunning story, I was enchanted till the end ~ Love that final line WOW ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-21955316490153302532014-05-03T18:20:12.387-05:002014-05-03T18:20:12.387-05:00sooo excellent, Susie! i hope you write much more ...sooo excellent, Susie! i hope you write much more about Twila.<br />i see vampires here, but that might be just me and my thing with Stephen King. :) and the Spanish moss has taken on a very dark weight. love it.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-40411644770058042892014-05-03T16:19:48.879-05:002014-05-03T16:19:48.879-05:00What an amazing wrtite Susie....intense and captiv...What an amazing wrtite Susie....intense and captivating and I want to hear more of Twila and her words.....I have a question for you: I am trying to put pages at the top of my blog...I noticed you have those as well, but I cannot get the pages to show without the curser having to go over them for them to appear...I have fiddled and fiddled with it...do you have any suggestions for me? :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-50460702401646396232014-05-03T05:35:08.886-05:002014-05-03T05:35:08.886-05:00Your image for fear's raspy tongue is stunning...Your image for fear's raspy tongue is stunning.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-9674690732017938732014-05-03T02:34:27.247-05:002014-05-03T02:34:27.247-05:00the final verse is stellar, Susie, to a very stron...the final verse is stellar, Susie, to a very strong write. ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-36723634112480043252014-05-03T02:23:36.467-05:002014-05-03T02:23:36.467-05:00What a superb portrait, Susie. That opening stanza...What a superb portrait, Susie. That opening stanza is faultless! (The kind of oomph of expelled air I get when I wish I had written something as well.) Your description never falters through each successive stanza as the scene plays out, and you have achieved that air of mystery too.. the undisclosed information adds to the sinister feel of Twyla's plight.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-28856586794703793112014-05-02T20:51:03.999-05:002014-05-02T20:51:03.999-05:00Incredible writing, especially "when you feel...Incredible writing, especially "when you feel the burning but cant find the flames".Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-67963523083775484002014-05-02T20:32:54.602-05:002014-05-02T20:32:54.602-05:00i love the grit the character shows
in a hostile s...i love the grit the character shows<br />in a hostile surrounding..Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-67580123263620722362014-05-02T18:22:47.165-05:002014-05-02T18:22:47.165-05:00So darn good. Loving that last stanza too.So darn good. Loving that last stanza too.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-71140372355313618102014-05-02T17:59:19.497-05:002014-05-02T17:59:19.497-05:00I really felt the emotion and the connections betw...I really felt the emotion and the connections between people in this piece, Susie.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-83133089246405592102014-05-02T17:58:44.567-05:002014-05-02T17:58:44.567-05:00Stanza, after amazing stanza .. until my favorite,...Stanza, after amazing stanza .. until my favorite, the last!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.com