tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post7436406515831429376..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Sunshine StainedSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-969309457223650542015-07-07T14:26:08.067-05:002015-07-07T14:26:08.067-05:00Your closing stanza and final line are especially ...Your closing stanza and final line are especially moving...thank you for adding your voice to the challenge, Susie!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-52571444705107740562015-07-04T15:56:36.796-05:002015-07-04T15:56:36.796-05:00Dear Susie--if hands can be stained by anything, s...Dear Susie--if hands can be stained by anything, sun is a top choice--may your prayers give you more of the strength you already have in such abundance. Thanks. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-42015628634806828042015-07-04T13:50:55.287-05:002015-07-04T13:50:55.287-05:00I like the idea of expelling doubt after each brea...I like the idea of expelling doubt after each breath of prayer. A beautiful closing line.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-64699642569822868342015-07-04T12:03:09.812-05:002015-07-04T12:03:09.812-05:00The contrast between the yellow bloom and the blue...The contrast between the yellow bloom and the blue sky is something quite special.. Maybe a sight to carry us through winter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-41773450849436920652015-07-04T11:26:20.987-05:002015-07-04T11:26:20.987-05:00Really pretty, Susie.Really pretty, Susie.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-3183609753996308882015-07-04T11:20:16.676-05:002015-07-04T11:20:16.676-05:00Susie goes existential and does so beautifully.Susie goes existential and does so beautifully.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58344259710370797012015-07-04T10:36:29.339-05:002015-07-04T10:36:29.339-05:00The imagery is too beautiful for words, though not...The imagery is too beautiful for words, though not your words of course :) The first three lines, I re-read thrice. I loved them the most.<br /><br /><a href="http://artofleo.com/2015/07/04/the-first-song/" rel="nofollow">Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-7291408744665234662015-07-03T17:16:50.889-05:002015-07-03T17:16:50.889-05:00I tried to pick one line, one stanza but they were...I tried to pick one line, one stanza but they were all beautiful to me.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-2810510699123649272015-07-03T16:35:23.819-05:002015-07-03T16:35:23.819-05:00My sunshine stained hands
cut through waves of unc...My sunshine stained hands<br />cut through waves of uncertainty<br />as my lungs struggle to expel doubt<br />after each breath of prayer.<br /><br />These are such beautiful lines! Indeed, it is our faith that allows us to expel doubt from our heart through the power of prayer. Beautifully executed :D<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com