tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post6629345489945906941..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Moth Holes in DogmaSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-71973556886115876912012-08-17T23:24:11.955-05:002012-08-17T23:24:11.955-05:00I especially love the closing stanza - so right on...I especially love the closing stanza - so right on!!!!! And you managed a poem about the word miscreant. Good for you!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47663182231160575712012-08-16T11:09:59.599-05:002012-08-16T11:09:59.599-05:00Perfect title for letting some light and air from ...Perfect title for letting some light and air from the world into the warmth of a closed society! And love? Loyal to the clan first, I think. No one executes heretics any more, yes?<br /><br />The extended metaphor works well and the happy lilt of your words shows that in addition to the name calling and possible exclusion from heaven, your character has joy in her heart.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-15828748826765300422012-08-16T08:44:46.843-05:002012-08-16T08:44:46.843-05:00light left moth holes
in their dogma...
That is w...light left moth holes<br />in their dogma...<br /><br />That is what happens when we start to think, sometimes. But sometimes I have been surprised that with further exploration dogma isn't always wrong. ("Religion" has been quite a journey for me) I liked this poem.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-20905811084834728862012-08-16T05:59:40.817-05:002012-08-16T05:59:40.817-05:00When the good book doesn't have the right answ...When the good book doesn't have the right answers we need to look elsewhere because the answers are there, just not in the places where we've always been taught they were. <br />We need to always be open to enlightenment. <br />Lovely poetry. Loved the moth holes letting in light :) Gentle and yet powerful in its truths. Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.com