tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post6425681705554541634..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Blogger Goddess with Facebook WingsSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16739091390555709052012-07-10T09:50:54.099-05:002012-07-10T09:50:54.099-05:00"Pulling the heart from my sleeve---
So many ..."Pulling the heart from my sleeve---<br />So many tears drip from my fingers---<br />crowned the queen of sad"<br /><br />Wow, this is so revealing and has a raw feel~<br /><br />Sometimes it is brave to just put yourself out there~<br /><br />Get well, you are missed! xo<br />Sending you a starry bouquet of Morning Glories!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-78543634217959086262012-07-06T11:07:18.579-05:002012-07-06T11:07:18.579-05:00Adorable!
If I didn't rewrite and delete......Adorable! <br /><br />If I didn't rewrite and delete... NO ONE would read my stuff ;)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-29510082662995697302012-07-06T08:12:02.374-05:002012-07-06T08:12:02.374-05:00And its why I enjoy every word you post....And its why I enjoy every word you post....Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-88717110192312462742012-07-05T21:18:32.271-05:002012-07-05T21:18:32.271-05:00Haha! What an interesting thought. As a blogger wi...Haha! What an interesting thought. As a blogger with Facebook wings, you're going to be the Queen Bird of Social Media :)Karishma Shettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10183133674860648743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58417414894345974702012-07-05T12:08:41.772-05:002012-07-05T12:08:41.772-05:00Enjoyed it...
Doubt does creep in sometimes.Enjoyed it...<br />Doubt does creep in sometimes.Kalahari blueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14559343115750745384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-45883693056279352982012-07-05T11:24:12.837-05:002012-07-05T11:24:12.837-05:00I'm most definitely with you on the rewrites. ...I'm most definitely with you on the rewrites. Once I hit publish, that's it!<br /><br />I love your second to last stanza. This is really a great poem.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-87854907501470663652012-07-05T10:21:01.948-05:002012-07-05T10:21:01.948-05:00Susie - this is very, very good! Loved every line....Susie - this is very, very good! Loved every line.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47331655937903149862012-07-05T09:21:16.816-05:002012-07-05T09:21:16.816-05:00I agree about the title--it catches up all sorts o...I agree about the title--it catches up all sorts of nuances, and the last line really drives them home--between confession and ...exhibitionism? So one feels sometimes, but I don't think, in the case of a sincere poem, its an ego trip, but a cleansing/sharing. Anyway, this is a very well-crafted poem,quite a road map to the way our minds work.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-55605044862963031172012-07-05T07:09:01.472-05:002012-07-05T07:09:01.472-05:00This is so clever! And, that has to be one of the...This is so clever! And, that has to be one of the coolest titles I've ever run across.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47991182866011969962012-07-05T06:28:28.593-05:002012-07-05T06:28:28.593-05:00Your image is fantastic, Susie!! Wow...it was made...Your image is fantastic, Susie!! Wow...it was made just for this moment it feels! <br /><br />I love your opening...closing your eyes...that's how I begin, too and I rarely do any re-writing after the initial working through of the wording. <br /><br />So cool to hear your process and I enjoyed your humor, too! Smiles to you, Susie!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-77317927465623434992012-07-05T04:02:19.025-05:002012-07-05T04:02:19.025-05:00The Queen of Sad and Goddess of Wings! I love the...The Queen of Sad and Goddess of Wings! I love the picture but thought: Not the butterflies!! She wouldn't! But she kind of did.<br /><br />A brave, bold piece with your signature introspection taken to the max.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-60501936859475327772012-07-04T23:54:58.070-05:002012-07-04T23:54:58.070-05:00I get the parody here, the internal editor popping...I get the parody here, the internal editor popping up and the poet responding with devil may care attitude. Here you've displayed a grim determination to see the piece through no matter what. Showing something like this Susie, is brave and works well. thanks for posting this in response to my challenge....rock on and viva laIsadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-48812264080930489372012-07-04T23:44:45.136-05:002012-07-04T23:44:45.136-05:00I don't know about this being too much of a pa...I don't know about this being too much of a parody (except for the title), but I sure like these:<br /><br />"a bully scuffle <br />that bares my inadequacy"<br /><br />"Pulling the heart from my sleeve---<br />So many tears drip from my fingers---<br />crowned the queen of sad"rosemary minthttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com