tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post6422218298182907955..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Wee Hours Of TogetherSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-424933318514253132014-09-02T20:09:35.534-05:002014-09-02T20:09:35.534-05:00I love the idea of memory having flesh...so effect...I love the idea of memory having flesh...so effective, Susie! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-13455294293455348362014-09-02T13:49:19.465-05:002014-09-02T13:49:19.465-05:00…that first stanza is so moving - and as everyone ...…that first stanza is so moving - and as everyone says above - the "arms reaching" is a truly inspired line! The fading of the tree just captures this so well… Lovely<br />Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-61025014079830061722014-09-02T10:50:33.533-05:002014-09-02T10:50:33.533-05:00the beginning of the end
always hard to live throu...the beginning of the end<br />always hard to live through<br /><br />this song goes with the post mortem<br /><br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m121tmJzcAc<br /><br />namaste<br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-3570898014209958572014-09-02T09:56:39.574-05:002014-09-02T09:56:39.574-05:00oh, yes... this is it, exactly. you have captured ...oh, yes... this is it, exactly. you have captured in words what i saw in this tree. i love it.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-1809207374094733972014-09-02T06:02:06.628-05:002014-09-02T06:02:06.628-05:00so evocative, Susie!so evocative, Susie!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-87011072262195292892014-09-01T18:36:55.598-05:002014-09-01T18:36:55.598-05:00The title is splendid. You had me hooked right fro...The title is splendid. You had me hooked right from the start, but the "arms reaching for last moments before goodbye has burnt the air" was my complete undoing. I have lived that moment and you have captured the essence of it in astounding perfection.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-90815952183291409132014-09-01T16:54:56.765-05:002014-09-01T16:54:56.765-05:00Impossible to pick one outstanding line, they each...Impossible to pick one outstanding line, they each are crucial to the next... beautiful, insightful poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-43839770275896180902014-09-01T09:40:30.891-05:002014-09-01T09:40:30.891-05:00... 'wee hours of together' ~ all the more...... 'wee hours of together' ~ all the more we cherish them. Lovely poem, Ms. S!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47420851160537604222014-09-01T09:32:35.977-05:002014-09-01T09:32:35.977-05:00I agree, that ending line says it all ~ Lovely wor...I agree, that ending line says it all ~ Lovely work Susie ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-6230716639028877012014-09-01T08:54:55.503-05:002014-09-01T08:54:55.503-05:00This is one of the most true poems I have ever rea...This is one of the most true poems I have ever read, Susie--in its ability to say so much with such economy, and in its insight. Really, an instant favorite for me.I can't even pick out one line I like better than another--love them all--they all come together and not a word is wasted.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-68291685915487424662014-09-01T08:25:31.091-05:002014-09-01T08:25:31.091-05:00I'm with grape.. the last lines are an object ...I'm with grape.. the last lines are an object lesson in cause and effect.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47781762576912627562014-09-01T06:38:07.799-05:002014-09-01T06:38:07.799-05:00the last stanza says it all...the last stanza says it all...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-18978699320128174962014-09-01T05:15:56.622-05:002014-09-01T05:15:56.622-05:00let the mistakes be bygonelet the mistakes be bygoneVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-69070347178760591602014-09-01T00:49:43.668-05:002014-09-01T00:49:43.668-05:00that final line packs a wallop ~that final line packs a wallop ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com