tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post6382572827163177582..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: NaPoWriMo 2013 Day 18 ~ We Judge a Broom by its FlierSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-74748121578802571652013-04-20T14:27:27.602-05:002013-04-20T14:27:27.602-05:00Love this! Love this! Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-12198047729132490962013-04-20T12:41:01.623-05:002013-04-20T12:41:01.623-05:00I love the direction you took with the prompt, Sus...I love the direction you took with the prompt, Susie, here the melting is a resolution and a metaphor. I do love the title too! Viva laIsadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-57847816891796378662013-04-20T11:51:33.701-05:002013-04-20T11:51:33.701-05:00i love this, Susie... am so glad you wrote about T...i love this, Susie... am so glad you wrote about THAT particular iconic melting and gave it your own melt, er, twist. very nice!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-81429118582887484192013-04-20T06:33:17.276-05:002013-04-20T06:33:17.276-05:00I enjoyed this twist on the familiar story; and co...I enjoyed this twist on the familiar story; and compromise WOULD definitely have been a great solution.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-87985535507026689392013-04-19T23:40:10.703-05:002013-04-19T23:40:10.703-05:00A young girl always had home within her and a witc...A young girl always had home within her and a witch didn’t need magic shoes to help her remember. somehow I loved this line....<br />very creative..... amazing Susie...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44851308504868179822013-04-19T23:08:40.018-05:002013-04-19T23:08:40.018-05:00Susie, you are the second person to write effectiv...Susie, you are the second person to write effectively about the Wizard of Oz, only you spoke of the needless struggle between the Witch and Dorothy. This looked beyond the simple story and told a metaphorical truth: Some of our biggest battles are fought without need. I wish the Pentagon could figure this out! <br /><br />Also, your title, most apt.<br /><br />Wonderful. Peace, AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-59206381988756348602013-04-19T22:07:18.737-05:002013-04-19T22:07:18.737-05:00How sad their could be no compromise or realizatio...How sad their could be no compromise or realization that neither needed the shoes after all. Makes me think there are probably situations like this all the time--where effective communication and willingness to be flexible might let everyone have what they want.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-22084125713676781772013-04-19T20:10:31.967-05:002013-04-19T20:10:31.967-05:00So well done, Susie. And you're right, it didn...So well done, Susie. And you're right, it didn't have to be the whole poem!<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44257895132552720122013-04-19T19:57:54.310-05:002013-04-19T19:57:54.310-05:00A great response to the challenge, Susie. I, too, ...A great response to the challenge, Susie. I, too, love your title!!!!! Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-45610356748800737652013-04-19T19:51:51.015-05:002013-04-19T19:51:51.015-05:00How creative of you .. how clever!!How creative of you .. how clever!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-86407133889516225652013-04-19T19:10:34.482-05:002013-04-19T19:10:34.482-05:00Didn't I just say, in my review, that I love y...Didn't I just say, in my review, that I love your titles? This is certainly no exception!<br /><br />Shoes are no light matter, but compromise would have been much better than mellllllltinnnnnggggg!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47880923422337425602013-04-19T19:09:00.943-05:002013-04-19T19:09:00.943-05:00You did an amazing job with this challenge!You did an amazing job with this challenge!Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-41552541582973277872013-04-19T18:29:39.606-05:002013-04-19T18:29:39.606-05:00Yes, we did both think Wizard of Oz! I guess it wo...Yes, we did both think Wizard of Oz! I guess it would have made for a much shorter movie if they had compromised! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-68131038618849981442013-04-19T17:07:47.988-05:002013-04-19T17:07:47.988-05:00I love your title, Susie and the way you cam eat t...I love your title, Susie and the way you cam eat this story from a completely different angle. Such a fun piece.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com