tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post5797894957029646844..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Watery MistressSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-57773141297346517802011-12-16T20:04:47.589-06:002011-12-16T20:04:47.589-06:00That's a beautiful poem!That's a beautiful poem!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-19163571093109142632011-12-16T16:41:24.201-06:002011-12-16T16:41:24.201-06:00Expertly done.
Anna :o]Expertly done.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-14436647613540002352011-12-14T22:38:57.223-06:002011-12-14T22:38:57.223-06:00Excellent piece, especially the bittersweet ending...Excellent piece, especially the bittersweet ending of the last two stanzas. Great Magpie, Susie!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-29842870004080496072011-12-13T16:32:51.640-06:002011-12-13T16:32:51.640-06:00Loving the depth as well as the ebb and flow in th...Loving the depth as well as the ebb and flow in this delightful piece.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47283695281634718132011-12-13T12:21:06.557-06:002011-12-13T12:21:06.557-06:00Fantastic interpretation of the prompt! Well done!...Fantastic interpretation of the prompt! Well done!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-60589264458623877132011-12-13T09:44:02.594-06:002011-12-13T09:44:02.594-06:00Wonderfully done, Susie. A sea-song and a dirge in...Wonderfully done, Susie. A sea-song and a dirge in one. Super!<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-85647152319040814712011-12-13T05:49:33.290-06:002011-12-13T05:49:33.290-06:00Original, creative take on this week's prompt....Original, creative take on this week's prompt...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-42055038688725160332011-12-13T05:19:50.047-06:002011-12-13T05:19:50.047-06:00Great Susie! More so hearing the voice-over. It...Great Susie! More so hearing the voice-over. It's sad when we desire but physically stopped in our tracks by circumstances!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-80925902568716690762011-12-12T22:41:41.788-06:002011-12-12T22:41:41.788-06:00what could be sadder than looking on a sea you can...what could be sadder than looking on a sea you cannot sail?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-76999009085944146532011-12-12T21:25:35.097-06:002011-12-12T21:25:35.097-06:00the salt of its lullaby...gosh, love that...and th...the salt of its lullaby...gosh, love that...and then the sadness there in the end...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-78204073563067958612011-12-12T19:54:57.870-06:002011-12-12T19:54:57.870-06:00wow, that watery mistress is vicious! great write...wow, that watery mistress is vicious! great write, susie.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-40663405068706368972011-12-12T19:23:55.991-06:002011-12-12T19:23:55.991-06:00Ah. The age old song of jealousy! Very well done...Ah. The age old song of jealousy! Very well done!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-28979300602922314982011-12-12T18:36:40.479-06:002011-12-12T18:36:40.479-06:00This is stunning Susie!!This is stunning Susie!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-24333285105403226902011-12-12T15:28:16.913-06:002011-12-12T15:28:16.913-06:00I like it. That's one powerful mistress.I like it. That's one powerful mistress.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-15594225255942791462011-12-12T12:57:03.194-06:002011-12-12T12:57:03.194-06:00Your poem tells a romantic if sad tale, every stan...Your poem tells a romantic if sad tale, every stanza with its own thought, its own slant. I love the first stanza especially - it is the story of my heart too...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-58527545646653393702011-12-12T12:56:04.460-06:002011-12-12T12:56:04.460-06:00aw, leave those wooden planks behind. this is love...aw, leave those wooden planks behind. this is lovely.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-37746632190535456522011-12-12T10:38:17.396-06:002011-12-12T10:38:17.396-06:00A hard lesson in frustration!A hard lesson in frustration!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-6591162755327628632011-12-12T10:22:26.468-06:002011-12-12T10:22:26.468-06:00Hi Susie, beautiful poem and loved your audio vers...Hi Susie, beautiful poem and loved your audio version. :)Nehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12895336357128654041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-10298981256337196112011-12-12T10:13:37.251-06:002011-12-12T10:13:37.251-06:00So many interesting responses to this picture, and...So many interesting responses to this picture, and this was is particularly evocative: you capture both the sense of yearning and indecision so very well.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-21564037011952814392011-12-12T08:40:58.331-06:002011-12-12T08:40:58.331-06:00Lovely... I especially like 5 and 6.Lovely... I especially like 5 and 6.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-22120865561157959442011-12-12T08:27:03.788-06:002011-12-12T08:27:03.788-06:00Beautiful lines SusieBeautiful lines SusieIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-31957062925668276932011-12-12T05:28:09.546-06:002011-12-12T05:28:09.546-06:00Ah! Another ancient mariner, I see...Ah! Another ancient mariner, I see...Cadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16184350413033668517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-23873843777342800752011-12-12T02:54:30.542-06:002011-12-12T02:54:30.542-06:00Such a powerful lead line. Such is maintained thro...Such a powerful lead line. Such is maintained throughout the whole poem. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-75118881842557996302011-12-12T02:51:38.466-06:002011-12-12T02:51:38.466-06:00You've covered the pic from all angles. Excell...You've covered the pic from all angles. Excellently done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-73690497326601022422011-12-12T02:44:52.778-06:002011-12-12T02:44:52.778-06:00This is wonderful Susie, even more so hearing you ...This is wonderful Susie, even more so hearing you read it!<br /><br />"I dreamed in the salt of its lullaby.<br />My eyes saw one blue horizon splashed in white waves."<br /><br />Lovely writing! :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.com