tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post4118931916739806226..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Failure's HopeSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-76059526231470105472013-05-11T05:26:53.003-05:002013-05-11T05:26:53.003-05:00Excellent stage setting, a splendid response to th...Excellent stage setting, a splendid response to the prompt.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-61841155663480221852013-05-10T04:50:25.268-05:002013-05-10T04:50:25.268-05:00Can I sit down now?
Phew. Every muscle hurts.
Can I sit down now?<br />Phew. Every muscle hurts.<br />Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-26108998186848749832013-05-09T12:07:59.285-05:002013-05-09T12:07:59.285-05:00And now we wait for the curtain to go up, but in m...And now we wait for the curtain to go up, but in many ways, perhaps the real story is in the prelude's perseverance. Lovely work, Susie.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-26814305343112912002013-05-09T08:04:40.270-05:002013-05-09T08:04:40.270-05:00This certainly creates the moment before the main ...This certainly creates the moment before the main act is about to begin. Here is a mood of uncertainty, and the strong sense of perseverance needed to attain a personal goal.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-3574070716529385312013-05-09T05:36:28.409-05:002013-05-09T05:36:28.409-05:00Although I'm not a dancer, I can relate to the...Although I'm not a dancer, I can relate to the nervousness and being perched on the edge of performing not quite knowing the outcome. Nice.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-33590763151204461372013-05-08T23:26:39.248-05:002013-05-08T23:26:39.248-05:00One should never stop believing and always give h...One should never stop believing and always give his /her best shot.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-70600250292831054592013-05-08T23:25:27.590-05:002013-05-08T23:25:27.590-05:00I read it once till the end and then read it again...I read it once till the end and then read it again and loved it all the more :) Esp love 'painted with the shadow of another's art'.rashmenonhttp://rashscribbles.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-3257771183666623202013-05-08T22:47:11.693-05:002013-05-08T22:47:11.693-05:00Well done...I love the stage you set and I can so ...Well done...I love the stage you set and I can so relate to the risk!<br />;DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-85846011055290005142013-05-08T18:38:09.416-05:002013-05-08T18:38:09.416-05:00Indeed a prelude. Good scene setting with atmosphe...Indeed a prelude. Good scene setting with atmosphere and feeling. I especially like "I can'ts attempting to steal her faith."Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-39042229375066092612013-05-08T18:16:32.453-05:002013-05-08T18:16:32.453-05:00I love this! You've perfectly set the stage w...I love this! You've perfectly set the stage with her nervousness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44224839805828120452013-05-08T17:32:31.144-05:002013-05-08T17:32:31.144-05:00Is it her last dance or not ~ You set the stage f...Is it her last dance or not ~ You set the stage for the dancer's grace ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-46604495342856171752013-05-08T16:53:25.628-05:002013-05-08T16:53:25.628-05:00A word missing in first line of second stanza? Oth...A word missing in first line of second stanza? Otherwise love your writing and feeling that this is the final chance.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-90001778884570792652013-05-08T15:49:21.551-05:002013-05-08T15:49:21.551-05:00Awesome, Susie, and the work the dancers put into ...Awesome, Susie, and the work the dancers put into the performance is awesome, too. Thanks for the prelude.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-11620216103044359842013-05-08T15:07:34.665-05:002013-05-08T15:07:34.665-05:00i kinda wanna say break a leg after reading this! ...i kinda wanna say break a leg after reading this! lovely, Susie.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-34141109268791770762013-05-08T15:07:05.189-05:002013-05-08T15:07:05.189-05:00A great setting of the scene here. Nice performan...A great setting of the scene here. Nice performance details--we're ready for what's coming.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.com