tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post3679369193002276081..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Emotic StaresSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-24859348548375174312012-01-19T20:32:24.119-06:002012-01-19T20:32:24.119-06:00Thank you SashiThank you SashiSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-55462050552976343402012-01-19T02:30:52.446-06:002012-01-19T02:30:52.446-06:00Painted flowers and buying a lie ... so compliment...Painted flowers and buying a lie ... so complimentary to each other in the verse... I loved the disenchantment of yours with the general perceptions... I liked the way you put it across in the verse...<br /><br /><br />Shashi<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2012/01/whispers-haiku-on-how-i-write-poetry.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-11320636497518107462012-01-18T19:34:45.905-06:002012-01-18T19:34:45.905-06:00Thank you Daydreamer...Thank you Daydreamer...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-54117064469829477882012-01-18T19:29:00.802-06:002012-01-18T19:29:00.802-06:00Thank you so much NatashaThank you so much NatashaSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-37690057296763986922012-01-18T19:28:34.840-06:002012-01-18T19:28:34.840-06:00Thanks Laurie..what we see has taken the model thr...Thanks Laurie..what we see has taken the model through hell at timesSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16876415331505678972012-01-18T19:27:26.540-06:002012-01-18T19:27:26.540-06:00Thank you Ed...Thank you Ed...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-44583885617377279122012-01-18T19:26:51.496-06:002012-01-18T19:26:51.496-06:00Thanks DThanks DSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-9445708307332213822012-01-18T19:25:40.511-06:002012-01-18T19:25:40.511-06:00Thanks Shay...Yes I know what is up tomorrow :)Thanks Shay...Yes I know what is up tomorrow :)Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-5862612184548666342012-01-18T19:25:08.552-06:002012-01-18T19:25:08.552-06:00Brian...yes it is sad that so many have to pay the...Brian...yes it is sad that so many have to pay the priceSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-47086813708480171042012-01-18T19:24:27.507-06:002012-01-18T19:24:27.507-06:00Thank you so much PatThank you so much PatSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16369626518949300532012-01-18T19:23:51.923-06:002012-01-18T19:23:51.923-06:00Ben it can be fun inside my head, but then it can ...Ben it can be fun inside my head, but then it can be hell...lolSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-21153632560524234152012-01-18T17:59:37.566-06:002012-01-18T17:59:37.566-06:00Great commentary in a wonderfully poetic fashion. ...Great commentary in a wonderfully poetic fashion. The finish is killer, and the image fantastic!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-84414390264764102012-01-18T13:58:20.508-06:002012-01-18T13:58:20.508-06:00I agree... there's much more than meets the ey...I agree... there's much more than meets the eye.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-55761036464648188552012-01-18T13:52:30.100-06:002012-01-18T13:52:30.100-06:00using beauty for wealth, this is why art, such as ...using beauty for wealth, this is why art, such as this piece, can only measure beauty. advertising can at best be clever, but never art. and so the image of picking the flowers is so good becuz of the inevitable death.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-48421373115883811672012-01-18T12:53:40.677-06:002012-01-18T12:53:40.677-06:00Great symbolism in this poem along with a great so...Great symbolism in this poem along with a great societal comment<br />thanks for your visitD Millerhttp://thewritepen.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-19503468508526259202012-01-18T08:10:12.396-06:002012-01-18T08:10:12.396-06:00So true, this look below the surface of things...b...So true, this look below the surface of things...but I still like that picture. *hides*<br /><br />PS--you-know-what will be up tomorrow, if the creek don't rise.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-91834729882921847552012-01-18T04:43:25.657-06:002012-01-18T04:43:25.657-06:00Seems most of Hollywood and most of the singers an...Seems most of Hollywood and most of the singers and models are all mostly plastic now. beauty is bought and paid for at a high price when it;s natural beauty has been forgotten.<br />This speaks such a gentle truth.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-4518574137060099772012-01-18T01:28:25.330-06:002012-01-18T01:28:25.330-06:00It must be fun inside your head :-)It must be fun inside your head :-)Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-90814605204153764582012-01-17T22:06:16.877-06:002012-01-17T22:06:16.877-06:00ugh...far too real...buy the lie...and the greates...ugh...far too real...buy the lie...and the greatest loss in this to me is the girls who learn it...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-63738706398963626352012-01-17T21:32:24.597-06:002012-01-17T21:32:24.597-06:00Thank you Pat...I have bought a lie or two sadly e...Thank you Pat...I have bought a lie or two sadly enoughSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-90166620284705795342012-01-17T21:16:43.488-06:002012-01-17T21:16:43.488-06:00That last line was great, so many willing to buy i...That last line was great, so many willing to buy into such a thing, wonderful verse.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-48124749274390766232012-01-17T20:56:15.496-06:002012-01-17T20:56:15.496-06:00Thanks @Buddah and @GinnyThanks @Buddah and @GinnySusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-18053617901438349582012-01-17T20:41:49.181-06:002012-01-17T20:41:49.181-06:00"Critical eyes choose the blossoms to display..."Critical eyes choose the blossoms to display<br />in advertising gardens where painted flowers<br />attract a population willing to buy a lie."<br /><br />And toss them out as soon as there is any sign of wilting, I imagine! A very evocative read, Susie. Well penned!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-31721261819960913212012-01-17T20:29:35.484-06:002012-01-17T20:29:35.484-06:00This is a great indictment of the objectification ...This is a great indictment of the objectification of the beauty industry. Also, it's a really good poem.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com