tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post2721307645192929116..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Questions Silenced By StonesSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-70343168872930266732012-09-26T17:56:38.836-05:002012-09-26T17:56:38.836-05:00Your jump to the last line is inspired.Your jump to the last line is inspired.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-67447589608197739442012-09-26T15:35:47.961-05:002012-09-26T15:35:47.961-05:00LovelyLovelyMimi Lenoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01616635898420835541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-38746096250209873822012-09-26T07:21:09.895-05:002012-09-26T07:21:09.895-05:00I agree this had a chill to it!
In a great way!
I ...I agree this had a chill to it!<br />In a great way!<br />I looove the line<br />chiseled hyphens, so clever!<br />I really enjoyed this poem :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-87781946722762310212012-09-25T08:51:04.345-05:002012-09-25T08:51:04.345-05:00This took me to the graveyard-
The energy of the d...This took me to the graveyard-<br />The energy of the dead and the wonder of who many were...<br />This is hauntingly brilliant!<br /><br />Wow, chiseled hyphens-love it!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-36156403737162069522012-09-24T20:52:53.201-05:002012-09-24T20:52:53.201-05:00Cemeteries are mysterious ... resurrecting all sor...Cemeteries are mysterious ... resurrecting all sorts of emotions ... great fodder for poetry. <br /><br />Your sevenling is amazing.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-66091441515863853462012-09-24T20:45:51.566-05:002012-09-24T20:45:51.566-05:00hmmm, pretty. i walk there.hmmm, pretty. i walk there.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-69956734500163519652012-09-24T13:58:21.894-05:002012-09-24T13:58:21.894-05:00Oh, what a great ending. Yes, it's all contai...Oh, what a great ending. Yes, it's all contained in those hyphens! Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-9278946386858491472012-09-24T12:45:24.794-05:002012-09-24T12:45:24.794-05:00I just love walking amid the stones...reading each...I just love walking amid the stones...reading each meaningful name. Beautiful thoughts, Susie. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-20144417585590481722012-09-24T06:38:19.626-05:002012-09-24T06:38:19.626-05:00Very nice....and the stones are always silent, are...Very nice....and the stones are always silent, aren't they? A powerful ending.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-28014916818449795242012-09-24T00:15:22.590-05:002012-09-24T00:15:22.590-05:00The stones , they are a mute witness to our despai...The stones , they are a mute witness to our despair..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16567470494995213573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-69431236021031804152012-09-23T22:36:16.132-05:002012-09-23T22:36:16.132-05:00I try so hard to read the chisels ... and sometime...I try so hard to read the chisels ... and sometimes that is all they are as time has made them unreadable - they don't "speak" anymore.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-24354437075127773102012-09-23T22:16:06.588-05:002012-09-23T22:16:06.588-05:00The stones kept their secrets to themselves. Nicel...The stones kept their secrets to themselves. Nicely Susie!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-8064650746617150832012-09-23T20:25:35.878-05:002012-09-23T20:25:35.878-05:00The line about the hyphens is just brilliant. Thi...The line about the hyphens is just brilliant. This is really excellent.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-50062015032117604192012-09-23T20:04:35.717-05:002012-09-23T20:04:35.717-05:00Those hyphens sure hide a lot of the story of some...Those hyphens sure hide a lot of the story of someone's life, don't they? Gorgeous writing!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-51592136661484419772012-09-23T19:39:12.984-05:002012-09-23T19:39:12.984-05:00yes, hyphens raise questions un-answered . . .yes, hyphens raise questions un-answered . . .Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-66788521874482859552012-09-23T14:50:51.598-05:002012-09-23T14:50:51.598-05:00So competent and complete. A miniature with delica...So competent and complete. A miniature with delicate observations. And yes, if the stones could talk...Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-60949310227012584202012-09-23T14:39:45.087-05:002012-09-23T14:39:45.087-05:00Know what? I forgot the form, reading this. That i...Know what? I forgot the form, reading this. That is the ultimate accolade.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-24887905500420786832012-09-23T14:20:19.997-05:002012-09-23T14:20:19.997-05:00'The chiselled hyphens slurred so many questio...'The chiselled hyphens slurred so many questions..' really a standout line, so much summed up in those bare figure--great take on the prompt, Susie.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-87196684248322237552012-09-23T14:06:47.719-05:002012-09-23T14:06:47.719-05:00I like the contrast of questions and silent stones...I like the contrast of questions and silent stones ~ Nice sevenling ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-84642822268431565782012-09-23T12:48:20.655-05:002012-09-23T12:48:20.655-05:00"the stones were silent"......beautiful ..."the stones were silent"......beautiful sevenling, kiddo.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-39787752492618800712012-09-23T11:46:48.087-05:002012-09-23T11:46:48.087-05:00Yes, they always do seem to be that way, but our t...Yes, they always do seem to be that way, but our thoughts about them are not.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-25233603554496312222012-09-23T11:22:42.914-05:002012-09-23T11:22:42.914-05:00This gave me chills as I read - you extracted such...This gave me chills as I read - you extracted such a pensive mood from the stones themselves.<br />Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com