tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post2052415563930134390..comments2024-03-05T10:48:27.842-06:00Comments on Confessions Of A Laundry Goddess: Four O'ClockSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-49416505635594013022017-05-27T12:15:00.735-05:002017-05-27T12:15:00.735-05:00Absolutely beautiful.. each moment hangs upon a si...Absolutely beautiful.. each moment hangs upon a silver thread.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-34370322264306099702017-05-20T11:39:02.832-05:002017-05-20T11:39:02.832-05:00Beautiful work! The second stanza is particularly...Beautiful work! The second stanza is particularly good.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-60075829776941580442017-05-20T01:30:50.936-05:002017-05-20T01:30:50.936-05:00Walking the path of paws I leave late afternoon
to...Walking the path of paws I leave late afternoon<br />to paint all my undone with the ebony touch of evening.<br /><br />Looking forward to a wonderful evening with the grey cats for company! Isn't it nice!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-17608798453683505192017-05-19T15:47:22.236-05:002017-05-19T15:47:22.236-05:00I would love an afternoon like that, but did not c...I would love an afternoon like that, but did not come to writing until right at bedtime... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-62232560135598470382017-05-19T15:20:24.151-05:002017-05-19T15:20:24.151-05:00This I absolutely love, Susie! The opening line ho...This I absolutely love, Susie! The opening line hooked me and the rest reeled me in. Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-16126751460627720992017-05-19T15:07:40.091-05:002017-05-19T15:07:40.091-05:00"I let sundown into my breathing" - that..."I let sundown into my breathing" - that is so gorgeous. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-31067312853045792492017-05-19T14:11:00.367-05:002017-05-19T14:11:00.367-05:00Beautiful painting of words here Susie. Mountains...Beautiful painting of words here Susie. Mountains of lists....I have some of those to! <br />We are all busy people these days trying to find time to be poets in a busy busy world. Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-562385311243811762017-05-19T11:10:42.642-05:002017-05-19T11:10:42.642-05:00corner of undone..love that.. makes me feel a litt...corner of undone..love that.. makes me feel a little guilty about my own seemingly endless list!!!!Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-41099291356994002172017-05-19T10:58:14.826-05:002017-05-19T10:58:14.826-05:00My goodness this is good!❤️ So much to love here, ...My goodness this is good!❤️ So much to love here, especially; "Daydreaming with my fingers black keyed to an alphabet I write the bird’s flight across a verse seeking wings not destination" took my breath away! Beautifully rendered.❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-5019353515960661122017-05-19T05:51:05.161-05:002017-05-19T05:51:05.161-05:00A wonderfully soft gentle flow to this marking tha...A wonderfully soft gentle flow to this marking that transition from sundown to night.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-9475279241493925512017-05-19T04:07:39.205-05:002017-05-19T04:07:39.205-05:00This mixed media challenge is a fun one Susie, bec...This mixed media challenge is a fun one Susie, because we enter <em>in media res</em>, at that point where the poet enters the forest of the poem, taking in the first most immediate sensations as rehearsing of the timeless begins. The moment of occasion is the proscenium, and your afternoon reverie is both door and destination. Great stuff.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-60820234930764295472017-05-19T01:55:33.887-05:002017-05-19T01:55:33.887-05:00luv the scenario you snapped for us
my favourite ...luv the scenario you snapped for us<br /><br />my favourite verse<br /><br />"Daydreaming with my fingers black keyed<br />to an alphabet I write the bird’s flight<br />across a verse seeking wings not destination."<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-88671316096963746102017-05-19T00:28:32.404-05:002017-05-19T00:28:32.404-05:00p.s. I like to see what the prompter wrote in rega...p.s. I like to see what the prompter wrote in regard to the prompt and get a better idea of what she had in mind for response.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-14573270941364175132017-05-19T00:23:30.183-05:002017-05-19T00:23:30.183-05:00A nice word portrait. I loved the infused sprink...A nice word portrait. I loved the infused sprinkling of self critique of a spot in the painting, "<em>(writng of) the bird’s flight across a verse seeking wings not destination.</em>"<br />..<br /><br />Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-91333422741812919242017-05-18T20:11:15.111-05:002017-05-18T20:11:15.111-05:00I can feel myself drawn into this moment in time.I can feel myself drawn into this moment in time.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-72183050837441274092017-05-18T19:24:03.211-05:002017-05-18T19:24:03.211-05:00Beautiful. What a privilege to catch a crane in th...Beautiful. What a privilege to catch a crane in the corner of your vision.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3174947457823680382.post-146827612565046372017-05-18T18:08:29.228-05:002017-05-18T18:08:29.228-05:00you painted dusk very well Susieyou painted dusk very well SusieAngiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413074557542736813noreply@blogger.com