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Monday, October 24, 2016

Answer Night

Photo ~ Ziegfeld Girl ~ Alfred Cheney Johnston

Answer night-
Where is the dream-
Where is the sigh-
Where is the nightingale?

Ah, said night-
Where is the beam-
Where is the cry-
Where is the sun’s sail?

Whining sapphire, said the sun-
Where is the rainbow-
Where is tomorrow’s heart-
Where is the morning glory?

Siblings, said the morning glory-
Where is destiny’s bower-
Where is the gift of hours-
Where is love given sight?
Here-said Cupid’s arrow-

©Susie Clevenger 2016

12 comments :

brudberg said...

We started almost the same way, but yours was so much more positive than mine... love the last line... that's how I would like night to be.

Debi Swim said...

I love this Kerry... the nightingale, the morning glory, cupid's arrow.

Debi Swim said...

I'm so sorry - I mean Susie, of course.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

WOW! This is amazing! A wonderful poem, Susie.

Jim said...

O yes, Susie. Night is humdrum except for lovers and evening sporting game events. Mostly.
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Gillena Cox said...

Good One!!!, absolutely luv it. The finale is awesome

much love...

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Gorgeous imagery here...❤️ sigh... love morning glory and tomorrow's heart ❤️

Helen said...

Susie, Susie ~~~ incredible write!!

Kim Russell said...

Oh, Susie, I love this!

Martin Kloess said...

Great Ending! (but then one wonders)
Te last line adds unexpected depth

ayala said...

I love this, Susie.

Ann Bennett said...

What a great read. The progression piqued my interest in reading the next line. Great work.

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