"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
Wonderful--a very interesting take on the word. k.
Susie, you're dropping it like it's hot!
Really nice... cracked voice - cracked pottery and that ending. Thumbs up
wow! this is packed with emotion
I remember starting my life over. Had to give up on some friends. Not give them up, but give up ON them. Your notion of "yesterday's nonsense" resonates. Thanks, Susie, for a poignant reminder that I am living a new life myself! Amy
Release them if troublesome. Keep only good friends!Hank
This is brilliant.
Echo Mama Zen!
Be glad 'your' voice only cracked and wasn't broken like the pottery. :)..
Wow Susie I think this is my favorite thing you've ever written! Simple, but says volumes!
So clever, so real. Just awesome!
Lovely to revisit this, Suzie--it illustrates a sort of commitment to rebirth. With help. k.
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