Friday, February 26, 2016

Sandy Sky


Stars shine in a sandy sky,
the sea giving up its jewels
to burnish joy into eyes
turned ashen by sorrow.

©Susie Clevenger 2016


Prompt Nights - Take Me To The Ocean

8 comments:

Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is pure perfection :D thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights.


Lots of love,
Sanaa

Vandana Sharma said...

Nature in its many hues

Sumana Roy said...

gorgeous...

kaykuala said...

to burnish joy into eyes
turned ashen by sorrow

There will be some ways out of the bad moments. It normally works that way!

Hank

Jae Rose said...

Like grit in the eye..polishing up for the outside world..i wonder how many of us do - a profound and shining poem

Magaly Guerrero said...

I can feel these lines all the way to my bones.

Buddah Moskowitz said...

So many emotions on this brief melange of words. Excellent.

followyourshadow said...

This is lovely