"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
©Susie Clevenger 2014
Marian over at Real Toads provided Donna The Buffalo's video Working On That as inspiration for our poetry.
Working On That
exactly what needs to be done.....you've nailed it Susie and in so few words...simply brilliant
perfect! working on that. :)
I love this Susie, words to reflect today ~
Concise! Living in peace is elementary after all.
Profound, powerful, beautiful!
I LOVE this! "Words of peace leave no wounds" and the removing of stones from our tongues. Susie, this is brilliant and would make for lovely art cards......a great message.
The very first line is in itself a poem. Beautiful!
removing those stones from our tongues . . . perfect.
You packed a punch in that one!!Well done.
Yes, and so we must do this...
Wow, Susie, you nailed this one. Perfect.Luv, K
Poignant piece, your first portion's so true, too.
Well done! Yes, damn those stones~
excellent, Susie - brief, to the point, powerful yet gentle ~
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